First of all, I love that Jae is going to be a High School Junior. We don't have many high schoolers on here at the moment.
A few things though,
First of all, under major and minor it would be extremly helpful if you could put in what he is planning on majoring and minoring in. I don't know why this isn't in the rules, but it just makes things a lot easier for us admins. just something like "Planning on having.... Major: --- Minor: ---"
Second, Please read through the entire rules, start to finish.
Third, the clothing style and history parts need to be a tad longer. I know we say you only need to put a few paragraphs for history, but by that we mean longer paragraphs. We don't need 50 million pages about every event in Jae's life, but a bit more than what you have would be great.
And that's about it. Thanks so much for your application, and please post back here when you've edited.
Thanks a lot!
xoxo,
Admin Eilee.