<span style='font-size:8pt;line-height:100%'>full name: Vanessa Geraldine Carlysle
nickname: 'nessa
codename: Copycat
birth date: April 15th, 1982
age: 26

grade/occupation: G-12, college student
affiliation: Weapon X
place of birth: New Brunswick, New Jersey
current residence: NYC, New York
family: Burt Cal (father, deceased), Dorothy Carlysle (mother)

height: 6 ft. (variable)
weight: 148 lbs.
special features: N/A
overall description:

Vanessa looks much younger then she really is. While she's in her mid-20's, she actually looks to be in her late teens. Usually wearing mini-skirts and tube tops, Vanessa tends to flaunt her good looks, that is when she isn't using someone elses.

mutation:

A powerful metamorph. Copycat could precisely duplicate another being's appearance down to the cellular level. As a result. she could replicate superhuman powers and abilities. She has survived otherwise fatal wounds by copying healing factors. Modification by Weapon X Program accelerated the rate at which she could duplicate others.

power flaws:

None known

likes:

Changing her appearance, smoking, drinking, smoking pot, dancing

dislikes:

Idiots, losers, good guys, Wolverine, Sabretooth

strengths:

Her looks ..

weaknesses:

Not really sure..

fears:

Spiders, snakes, heights

habits:

Smoking, drinking, drug use

ambitions:

To destroy the X-Men, first and foremost.

personality:

Vanessa Carlysle has a cold personality and tends to dislike anyone who she comes across. She won't hesitate to tell you what she thinks about you. She uses her looks to get what she wants and she knows damn well that she's beautiful.

Vanessa enjoys making people look bad, and usually tries to 'frame' even her friends by copying them and pulling pranks on others. She tends to wear short skirts, giving off an eyeful of more then most people can handle.

history:

sample post:

XxXxX

player alias: James
password: xx
member title: Now I Can Copy You

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If someone could look her over and tell me if any changes are required before I do the sample post, that would be great.

xx. the overall physical description MUST be two full sized paragraphs long. thus far you have yet to even meet that requirement. we want to know what this character looks like, go into great detail so we can imagine her please.

xx. try and go into a bit more detail when it comes to her powers -- we're looking for one full sized paragraph that really gets the nitty gritty on what this girl can do ... and don't say she has no known flaws. EVERYone has flaws, especially mutants. what isn't she capable of doing? what hinders her powers? i'd like to see her flawed a lot as she will be no more than a class two mutant. this girl cannot be perfect. so yeah, you'll need a paragraph describing her power flaws too.

xx. in the likes, dislikes, strengths, weaknesses -- you're supposed to be convincing me you know what this character is like, and that you can play her on the site. saying you aren't sure what her weaknesses tells me you haven't developed her in your own mind. as this is a movieverse site, with a lot of comic tweakage, it's very easy for you to use your own imagination and put your own personal spin on this character. what makes her tick? what gives her adrenaline to keep going? what is she passionate about? what does she hate? i'm looking for quite a lot here -- you didn't follow the expected AT LEAST 5 minimum.

xx. the personality must be 3 FULL SIZED PARAGRAPHS as well, love. look over some of the other applications on the site and you'll see what i'm looking for. you haven't met the requirement here yet.

xx. as we're based on the movies, the half of what you have in the history doesn't work. for one thing, cable is not a canon on our site, thus your including him in your history makes no sense. you've failed to show us what your character has been doing throughout the events of the first film, as we take place right before the events of the second film. i'd really like you to create this history from the ground up, using the comic/wikipedia history as a guideline. we know she's in weapon x, so figure out a way for her to have been placed there under william stryker's rule ... give a history that flows with that of the rest of the mutants on the site and doesn't go against the first film please. as such, you do need to write your own history rather than just citing another site. it helps us know that you've got a handle on the character you've chosen to play.