name:
age:
contact:
experience:
how'd you find us?






full name: first middle last
explain the names:
nickname:
age/year:
house:
any titles?: [prefet, quidditch, etc]






eye color:
hair color:
skin tone:
celebrity portrayal:





likes: (at least ten)
dislikes: at least ten
strengths: at least five
weaknesses: at least five
quirks: at least three
love potion: smells that attract you, at least three
patronus:(animal that represents you
boggart: worst fear
dementor: worst memory -- 1 paragraph

personality: at least three paragraphs






parents:
siblings:
history: at least four paragraphs







member title: the title above your member card
pets?:
anything else about your character we should know?:
other:


roleplay sample:

ok i'm finished i think but if there is anything that you guys would like me to add then i will fix it.

Darling, if you could, I'd rather the history be in actual paragraphs. Each paragraph elaborating on an important event in Lily's life.
And the personality? It's so....run-on-esque. I hate that. Elaborate on things like her strengths and weaknesses?
And you forgot the fifth weakness.

ok as you can see i added a little more i hope you like it.

i am really, REALLY angry.

you might remember my lily potter application.
http://z11.invisionfree.com/___nte/index.php?showtopic=78

i couldn't do it because i was going through some emotional issues at that time. i actually emailed the admin explaining why i couldn't be active and apologised. but that doesn't really matter.

YOU ARE A COPIER. and not even one that isn't obvious. COME ON, THE APP IS ON THE SAME SITE! even an idiot could note the similarities. just because you can't think up ideas and your app didn't mean the standards asked for by the admin, doesn't mean you can copy MY APP.

as for the similarities? let's just look at the first few lines of the personality, shall we? This girl's version, AKA THE COPIER'S, is in bold, mine is in italics below. (The original.)

A loyal leader at heart,
A leader at heart,
Wow, it's so WEIRD how they both begin the same way!

Lily can be bossy though she tends to never notice unless someone points it out to her.
Lily can be occasionally bossy, though she tends to never realize this unless someone points it out.
Changing a few words doesn't stop it being wrong.

She usually is the one who likes to take control one way or another and hates it when people tries to be the boss of her, most of her friends no better than to try to take control of anything Lily is involved in, so never try to be the boss when she’s around.
She usually tries to take control of things one way or another, and hates it if anyone tries to do the same, or in other words, tell her what to do.
...One way or another? Funny how both times the phrase is used. Basically she said the same thing but in a much longer-winded way, some parts identical.

To some people she can seem very arrogant, and maybe she is. She’s very sure of herself and what her strengths and abilities and never underestimates her talents.
To some people she gives the impression that she's arrogant, and maybe even she is. She's sure of herself and her abilities and never underestimates or overestimates her talents.
...This should be obvious.

There's no point even me taking out quotations. Each paragraph seems to almost be a duplicate; the first just described in detail above. The second outlines how she's ambitious, intelligent, hopes to be an auror, has her priorities straight and is quite impatient and competitive. The third is about her temper and opinionated nature, being outgoing and loud.

Of course, Lily Potter is brave. Not in the tasteful, unobvious way, either. There's practically nothing the girl won't do if circumstances call for it.
Of course, Lily Potter is brave. Not in the tasteful, unobvious way, either. There's practically nothing the girl won't do if circumstances call for it.
Wow... ISN'T THIS EXACTLY THE SAME?

Melanie, you're pathetic. I worked so hard on that app and have gone through so much lately that you just bloody COPYING the whole personality. It's basically a short, CRAPPIER version of what I spent so long writing and perfecting. This is not the admin's fault in the LEAST, but it shows how crappy a person you are Melanie for doing this. How stupid you are, too. Just so you know, I'm going to see what I can get done about this in terms of invisionfree to see if it's allowed, and also-if I see you using the personality ANYWHERE else, I will go completely batshit.

i don't think it's too much to ask to get this girl rejected on your site. im sorry i had to register to post, but hopefully you understand why i needed to do this. i'm aware it's no one's fault but melanie's.

Claire first of all don’t accuse me of copying of your work when you don’t even know me so you can just go to hell.
ooc.the template got screwed up so i'm trying to fix it thats why everything is blank

Thank you, Ellie. <3

Melanie, "I don't even know you". I don't need to know you to know that you directly copied my work. Anyone could tell. Trust me, I showed a lot of people. Most are my friends, yes, but there were a fair amount, many like Lia and Jill who run HP sites of their own and wouldn't lie and ruin their nice-person rep.

What's the worst is that you don't even apologize. It's disgusting, really. You're a year older then me and you go and do this. In a strange way, I pity you a little.

Shame I'm too angry to be that empathetic.

Oh, the template got screwed up, did it?

Right.

Ellie, another person I messaged was the admin of PC. I was asking to see if I could post on their forums about if Mel was using this app anywhere else, but reasonably she said that it wouldn't be a good idea with inter-forum drama and all that. However, this admin, 'anasi', saw the app before it was changed, I assume, and I've never typed/messaged her before then. That would be a very unbias source, if needed.

If you could talk to anasi, I'd appreciate that.

i just messaged anasi about it.

i feel bad dragging her into this though.

link to prntscrn

here's the prntscrn of the original message i recieved from her.

if she does reply, and deems it not like, dramaish for it to happen between the two boards, then i'll post the prntscrn of that here, too.

i can also get prntscrns of at least five people i talked to about this happening, and an email i sent prior to this girl editing her application.

i don't really think i need more proof then the fact she edited her app 'blank' after i made these statements, though. :S