ACCEPTED
I already mentioned the bit to you about the dormant DreamWalker, so that's quite alright. The only other thing is the mention of a training academy. That's not quite correct in line with the rest of the plot since the future investigators are chosen by a selective process of the Mendecant Superior. However, you can say that he trained himself to become one, was going to inquire about a job, or had been notified of his status of acceptance before everything took a turn in a different direction.
Lovely app, and absolutely accepted.