A little girl
A big world
Mama's word
Was always heard

Sunny-side up
Was how she arrived
Sunny-side down
Was how she would die

She was happy 'till 11
Then she left Heaven
A horrid self-torture
Using popular culture

Sunny-side down by 13
She wasn't pretty, she wasn't lean
Suspended by self esteem she would dangle
Until music became her angel

She became happy again
Far away from them
Now when there's pressure
The music can catch her

that was really good! gr8 job! the rhyming's good! i like you'r quotes by the way! ;)

Thanks!!

I'm thinking about submitting it to the literary arts magazine at my school but I can't decide.