"Please tell me again. Why are we going to Sak's?" Whitney Feldman asked ignorantly, blindly unaware of the ah-bious reasons.

"I suh-wear to gawd Whitney.If you ask me that 1 more time I'll get on your MySpace delete all your friends and forward Jason Harper all your IM's about how hot he is." Anna Wintor threatend.

"You wouldn't!" Whitney yelped,as the girls entered the upscale department store.

"Oh trust me,I would. But think of it this way, then you and Macey would have something to bond over."Anna glanced in Macey's direction,pleased to see her nervously chewing on her acrylic nail " You could start a little club, an call it"ETIASAMCTIP."

"What?" Macey took her thumb out of her mouth.

"Every one thinks I'm anti-social and my crush thinks I'm phsyco."Anna informed.

"Great but we want to know what the abreviation stands for."Haley Miller chuckled.

"Shut it Miller. Your two steps away from landing a spot in the back of the Lexus."Anna threatend again.

Haley rolled her eyes and refrained from another nasty comeback.

"Ooh I looove this!"Macey said holding up a large Fendi tote.

"You Do Not want that."Anna said that like she would say puke.

"Whyyy." Macey whined,looking longingly at the large leather bag.

"Beacause it's from last season. Do you actully want to be see carrying that around? Didn't think so.Gawd, do I have to expuh-lain everything?'" Anna huffed.

"OMG!!!They have the Ella Moss jumpers!" Whitney squealed exitedly,running over to the rack as best she could in 5 inch Miu Miu platforms and 0-stretch Chip and Pepper skinny jeans.

"Really!" Macey joined her,doing the same half run.

"Oh wow. It's a tacky dress.Like I haven't seen one of those before. Open Haley's closet hand you'll see every one every sewn." Anna sneered,picking up an orange silk Prada headband,rubbing the fabric between her thumb and index finger and quickly putting it back on the gray marble table.

Tell me what you think so far. I'll post the rest of the chapter later.

its good, but a little confusing. i mean, so many characters are being introduced at once, and they dont really have distinct characters.

Thank you so much for reading it Gossip Girl!! I'll be posting the rest of the chapter and try to do a little bit better at defdinig my characters

i guess it is ok, a little confusing as said bt ok i will read the rest to see what i think

this is really good! i really liked it! and i generaly don't even like this genre, so that's saying something! but, i said i'd comment on some of your stuff so here it is! really good stuff! kudos! just you might wanna try'n make the plot a little clearer! it doesn't need to be clear-cut! this is good! but it may confuse some people so you might just wanna explain a bit about the characters and what they'r doing! even small stuff like saying who's close friends or what they think about hanging out with these people! i dunno! it's not necessary, your story's quite good and i do like stories, sometimes, that you start out a little confused! just a suggestion! but, otherwise, it rox! good job! :D