Rating:Some swearing..ranging from damn to hell to bitchy.=)Dont read if you cant handle very mild swearing.

Andrea:Long Black hair,white skin,wears a red jacket with hood.18 years.



Chapter 1
~Table in the middle of Quen Vetra Club~
"So are you going out with him?"-Nicola.Andrea pondered for a moment and said
"No,Tyler much too skinny for me,plus I am not dating currently.You know what Sean was like.."-Andrea
"Yes,yes,yes.That's why we're having this night out Andy.Just your girly mates."-Nicola
Andrea smiles"I suppose so,since we're here on some kind of..uhmm...the men are all in...tight..oh right."-Andrea
Nocola giggles"So are you coming to dance And?Look Christinna's dancing like there's no tomrow!Come on!My God that girl looks tired."-Nicola
"I'm actually rhinking of hitting the hay back at the house."-Andrea
"Rubbish!It's only 12:24!And we've only just started."-Nicola
"Fine,3 more hours then I'm going."-Andrea
"Ok,just come on up and dance with us,no guys this time.Ugh is that Jason Westland?I can't beleive he stood me up for Sophie George."-Nicola
"Nevermind he's spotty anyway."-Andrea



~Dance Floor~
Andrea Dances for hours until it's 4 am.
"Oh God!Mum and Dad are gonna slay me for being so late!"-Andrea
"Bugger,you'd better get home soon Andy bye!"-Shiela



~The streets in front of Quen Vetra~
Andrea walks along the street unaware of eyes following her.She gets to a small alleyway when a large figure appears and jumps ontop of her.She screams but no-one hears.Luckily she forgot to leave her beer bottle in the club.She smashes it over his head and he rolls off.She runs away off home.


Comments? :)

its really good, u should make it longer tho it seemed a bit rushed buh i like it so far keep up the good work
luv Indi

Wow, interesting style. Is it like a script sort of thing? But I think it could use some more detail.

Oh, and welcome to this club.