I'm sorry if you wanted to read this story, but something just urges me to take it down.

i apologise.

cute! It's sort of poetic in a way. I like it.

I really like it. It's got good description and like lakegurl said it's kind of poetic or at least that's the kind of feeling you get from reading it.
I'd look to read some more to find out where this goes.

edit: sorry, idk why i don't want to have the second aprt up anymore.