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Title: Not Good Enough


gossipgirl - January 27, 2007 01:55 PM (GMT)
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Not good
Not good enough for your company

I should
Just retire to someplace sunny

When the sun does shine
It still casts a shadow
And the rain's all mine
Then I take my last bow

I'm disgusting
So far
My heart is rusting

A broken timepiece
Laid to rest
The clockwork's stopped working
Gone still in my breast

Oh the pain
Heartache even

Stays away for now
But until then

I'll still attempt
To bend
Over backwards
To please you

Not good enough
But still I love
You

Melancholy
Unbearably
Devoted to wanting you
To accept
Me

Cheesecake - January 28, 2007 12:49 AM (GMT)
Wow, that was really heartwrenching! I liked it a lot!

siena - April 15, 2007 03:36 AM (GMT)
I feel like this sometimes toward my father... anyways, heartrending and very nice :)


lakegurl93 - April 15, 2007 06:41 AM (GMT)
love, love, love it!




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