Sweetest Goodbye.
Give me your sweetest goodbye.
Even through all your secrets and your lies,
I will always love you.
Until the day I die.
Give me your sweetest goodbye.
And even though you're thousands of miles away,
I would still com running for you.
Nothing can keep me at bay.
Give me your sweetest goodbye.
Yes. They're making you break a promise that you have made.
But I know our memories will never ever fade.
Give me your sweetest goodbye.
And just let my make-up run.
For, to other people, it is oh so much fun.
Give me your sweetest goodbye.
And if you do have to leave,
Forever and always,
I shall have to cry myself to sleep.
Give me your sweetest goodbye.
Always know that my love for you,
Is and always will be true.
Give me your sweetest goodbye.
Though you're leaving is so hard.
It has helped me realize a couple things though.
It's not what you say.
But it's who you're with.
And not what you do.
Give me your sweetest goodbye.
And show them what a fatal mistake they have made.
But always know,
Forever is how long I shall wait.
Give me your sweetest goodbye.
And even though you're gone,
In my heart your memory shall always live on.
Give me your sweetest goodbye.
And promise me this:
Everytime you see a shooting star,
You shall wish.
Give me your sweetest goodbye.
And I will never have to ask that forbidden question:
"Why ?"
Give me your sweetest goodbye.
And promise me our love wasn't just a lie.
i really liked this, simple and sweet.
the rhyming for the first couple stanzas is a tad cliche though
I also noticed how the rhyming was somewhat cliche.
Still, I really liked it. I love poetry and songs that are about love and loss.
You really caught the emotion in these lines, so, good job!!!
Give me your sweetest goodbye.
And even though you're gone,
In my heart your memory shall always live on.
Give me your sweetest goodbye.
And promise me this:
Everytime you see a shooting star,
You shall wish.
Give me your sweetest goodbye.
And I will never have to ask that forbidden question:
"Why ?"
Give me your sweetest goodbye.
And promise me our love wasn't just a lie.
oh thanks you all so muchly ! :]].
the whole time i was writing this, i was pouring tears,
so i suppose that is how i put so much feeling into it :]