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Nickisha - June 18, 2005 06:30 PM (GMT)
This is a song I wrote maybe two months ago... It kind of represents me so I wrote it :P. It's called Just Trust Me. Hope you enjoy it :)

In the dim light
out at night
dont know where to go
your walk step after step
its hard but true
that if you walk a mile
in someone elses shoes

(Chorus)
Your different
your crazy
you have no clue
your an individual
thats all you'll ever be
Just trust me

and

Gettinga little brighter now
starting to see
open your eyes a little at a time
a door is open
waiting for you
go on in and look at what you find

(Chorus)
Your different
your crazy
you have no clue
your and individual
that all youll ever be
Just trust me

I said trust me!
i wont let you fall
to the ground
and break your neck
youll always be my friend
thats a promise
that will always be kept


(a bit softer)
I'm different
I'm crazy
I have no clue
I'm an individual
That's all I'll ever beever be
Just trust

(a bit louder)
ME

just trust me

yeah

September - June 18, 2005 08:29 PM (GMT)
That was good

Marzipan - June 22, 2005 08:59 AM (GMT)
Neat. I liked it. I'm sure everyone is tired of the grammar police, but I hope this is helpful..."your" should be "you're," as in "you are." If you're okay with that, then *shrug*

Nickisha - June 23, 2005 08:04 PM (GMT)
I didn't notice... Oh well, thanks for the tip and thanks for the the feedback as well :)

MissDreamer - July 2, 2005 07:12 PM (GMT)
That is really good. I loved it.




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