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Title: Questions
Description: Kind of a poem kind of a song


nika613 - November 14, 2006 07:48 AM (GMT)
[I] If I ask you a question
Will you answer me
Can you point me in the right direction
Away from here
I need to escape
This lonely life and all its pain
Soon I will break
Driven insane

If I drive away
Will you follow my car?
If I decide to stay?
Will you tell me who you are?
I need to get away from my head
I need someone to tell me what is dead
And what is living coz I can't tell the
Difference.

If I fall over the edge
Will you catch me
If I don't wake up instead
Will you tell me
I need to know that you'll be there
No matter where I end up being
Coz I know you really care
About when you look at me what your seeing
I know you really want to know
Why the pain inside me always grows
And why I've got this wall around me
That you can't get through

So when this darkness chases me away into the sky
I want you to know your not the reason that I wanted to fly
And when the clouds tumble over and you all run for cover
Remember with you in my heart I could die

gossipgirl - November 23, 2006 09:52 AM (GMT)
I want you to know your not the reason that I wanted to fly

i dont like this line, it sems a little strained, i think there could be something better for this line.

otherwise, it's a really good song!




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