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Title: Not Meant To Be..
Description: When Things Just Aren't Meant To Be..


.:|P.S.I.Love.You.|:. - October 11, 2006 07:28 PM (GMT)
There once was a time if I just closed my eyes,
I could see us together as one.
But after these years of growing apart,
I can see that dream is done.
You were the one who knew me inside and out,
And always knew just what to say.
Any problems I had would disappear,
When you said it would all be okay.
There was always a special connection with us,
And these days it seems to be gone.
Whatever we had died a long time ago,
But it's just so hard to move on.
Those times I'd drown in the blue of your eyes,
You never noticed a thing.
There were nights I laid awake and thought,
Of the love our friendship could bring.
No matter how hard I've been trying,
The truth is so hard to see.
I guess it takes a while to let go,
Of something not meant to be.


Tell me what ya think! This is my first poem on here, but be as cuel as needed! Thanks!

Love,
Hils xXx

gossipgirl - October 12, 2006 10:39 AM (GMT)
really nice contemporary poem.

however, there's not really any need to highlight, underline, italicise the words. they should speak for themselves. but of course, its your own style, so have at it if you want.




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