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Title: You lied
Description: Have u ever had someone lie to you?


Maya010 - July 31, 2006 09:54 PM (GMT)
You lied, you mistreated, and everything about you I believed in.
A stranger I never knew, until we fell apart, I saw the true you.

A soul I could never find was right there, flashing in front of my two eyes.
I fell into a trap, and soon I felt like I couldn’t escape, now I see you’re hurting, there’s only one of me, and no matter how hard you try, I’m tough to replace. Looking into your eyes now, I see nothing, I’ve shut down my heart, it no longer interprets the action of loving.

Once in my life, I danced to the music of two, I now dance alone, because I’m no longer with you. I’ve grown, and accepted the fact that not all things are in my control. I sing to my own note, and learn to stop living with just hope. I laugh and joke, and realize that with life I have to cope.

I will create the person I will be for the rest of my life, and the things that happen within my life, will sculpt my heart. You took a piece of my heart away, but keep it, you might miss it in later days.

gossipgirl - August 1, 2006 10:55 AM (GMT)
wow! that was beautiful.

And soo soo true. I had pretty much the exact same thing happen to me with a friend, so i can relate. Can't wait to see more of your work.

Maya010 - August 1, 2006 11:04 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (gossipgirl @ Aug 1 2006, 10:55 AM)
wow! that was beautiful.

And soo soo true. I had pretty much the exact same thing happen to me with a friend, so i can relate. Can't wait to see more of your work.

Thanks for the comment, this poem really came from personal experience, and it was really from deep within.




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