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Title: Red Light District
Description: pg-13


gossipgirl - July 23, 2006 02:50 AM (GMT)
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Red lights flash around
Engulfing us in the fire

The seven sins come out to play
Weakening us with desire

Girls with feather boas tease
To give themselves in the end

Most hope to stay away
Never go round that bend

But the lights will play to your hidden wishes
And you will succumb

To the beating of the final drum.


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Okay I know it feels a little off... but...any comments?

Anwen - July 23, 2006 09:24 PM (GMT)
I loved it! The theme of lust was great and true for one. Writers block my ass...

Your amazing. love you

X

gossipgirl - July 24, 2006 01:50 AM (GMT)
Hahahaha. God. What would I do without ya. Thankies.

I love you way more lol.

Maya010 - August 1, 2006 11:14 PM (GMT)
Hey I wanna know what this poem was all about. Do you think you could fill me in?

gossipgirl - August 2, 2006 11:24 AM (GMT)
okay well basically, a red light district is ummm... well.. a place where prostitutes and drugs go to play... lol. this poem is about how the lust and sinfulness will take you over.

p.s. not from experience...ew...Lol.




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