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Title: Peace
Description: still unsure about the title


Cheesecake - July 21, 2006 11:58 PM (GMT)
Okay, now I don't usually write much poetry, so go easy on me. lol
I guess this should be rated G


I stand outside on this warm, summer evening
The scent of warmth and carelessness hangs in the air
It surrounds me like a soft blanket
I am weightless, standing on a cloud
My spirit flies free with birds
Runs wild with horses
No restraints can bound me
Nothing else matters
To find such peace is a rare occasion
A treasured moment in time
For it shall be gone so quickly
It's as though it was never there at all
But for those who embrace it
Savor and hang onto it for just one moment longer
A part of it will stay with them forever.

gossipgirl - July 22, 2006 03:25 AM (GMT)
caitlin that was beautiful. and the title is fine. except, shouldnt it be "bind" instead of "bound"

Cheesecake - July 22, 2006 04:44 AM (GMT)
Thanks! :D And I think you're right about bind, oops.




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