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Title: Forgotten
Description: Might should be PG, I don't know...


Dreamer - July 10, 2006 04:40 PM (GMT)
Outcast,
Lonesome,
Forgotten...

Put aside,
Left to die,
Forgotten...

In the cold,
In the dark,
Forgotten...

Without love,
Without care,
Forgotten...

Left alone,
In this life,
Forgotten...

Because he’s different,
Because he needs help,
He’s forgotten...

Kicked out of church,
The one place,
Where he’s supposed to be welcome,
No, he’s forgotten...

Pushed from society,
Left to himself,
Forgotten...

Lonely,
Lost,
Forgotten...

Last minutes,
Last breath,
Forgotten...

Police find his body,
Stone cold,
Dead.

But nobody knows him,
Nobody cares,
It’s written off as a suicide.

But no one knows what he felt inside,
All because,
He was...
Forgotten...


It's about a boy I briefly knew... Tell me what you think, thanks! :D

gossipgirl - July 11, 2006 09:44 AM (GMT)
wow that was really sad.. yet poignant. i really liked it. hope to see more of your work!

Dreamer - July 12, 2006 03:48 PM (GMT)
Thank you. :D


P.S. I posted that BEFORE I read the "ratings" thing... sorry, it should have been PG-13. (According to that.)

Sorry about that!

gossipgirl - July 13, 2006 07:39 AM (GMT)
your welcome, and btw, WELCOME TO THE CLUB lol


Dreamer - July 13, 2006 05:14 PM (GMT)
Thanks! lol! :D

sweetnesss323 - January 14, 2007 02:06 AM (GMT)
That was amazing :)

fireshadow - February 7, 2008 03:22 AM (GMT)
that was amazing! write more! :D




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