I really needed to write something, and this just poured out. I don't usually do rhyming, but I gave it a whirl.


I can't do this anymore,
My life is a lie,
I have to write something,
My life's gone awry.

I wish I could see you,
Fly out there now,
But you'll never take me,
And now I must bow.

Bow to the will you've placed on my shoulders,
Bow to the lie I call my life,
Bow to everyone around me,
And bow to you, my sinfull wife.

wow i really liked that, you could incorporate it into one of your hist. fics.

last stanza's great.

this is how you spell sinful btw.

Thanks. Hmm...I never thought of putting it in a story...I'll think about it. See, each stanza was really about something completely diff from the others. Like the first half of the second stanza was about you.

i know it was. lol. thanks. sniff.

still, could work in a hist. fic.

lol tear fest.

hmm...i'll think about it.