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Title: Country Houses


gossipgirl - June 29, 2006 08:54 AM (GMT)
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Seeing white frills and organdie

Classical piano
Relaxes the soul

Black sheep all around
With a cow or two

Sky seems lower,
Bluer, cloudless.

Broken, brown fences
With wire netting

And then I arrive
At the white-washed edifice
A simple cottage.

lakegurl93 - June 30, 2006 02:11 AM (GMT)
your writing=LOVE

gossipgirl - June 30, 2006 07:56 AM (GMT)
thank you so much coll!

right back atcha by the way, lol.

September - July 2, 2006 06:14 AM (GMT)
It's alot less dark than the poems often posted here, and it is somewhat refreshing. I don't know, it sort of reminded of Haiku? Is that the word I am looking for? No, maybe Imagist...lol...tired, so, oh well. But the point is that it was really good. So, congrats!




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