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Title: Admit It
Description: you think i'm worth it


gossipgirl - June 24, 2006 09:36 AM (GMT)
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When I feel this
How can you just keep me away from
You

Do you dare to admit that
You think I am worth it

When you feel this
How can you just throw it away
Out of the blue

Do you dare to admit that
You think I am worth it

I am walking under water now
How can you just turn a blind
Eye

Do you dare to admit that
You think I am worth it

Our feelings are walking under water now
How can you just suppress it and act like i was all a
Lie?

I guess you don't dare to admit it
Well I still know I'm worth it

You let us drown
I don't think it's possible for me to come around

September - June 24, 2006 05:46 PM (GMT)
Actually, that was really very nice.

lakegurl93 - July 5, 2006 06:31 AM (GMT)
It was good, but deffinently not up to your usuall standard.

gossipgirl - July 5, 2006 11:07 AM (GMT)
i know.i felt like writing but couldnt think of anhything, so this came out. lol.

thanks for the comments btw.

Anwen - July 5, 2006 07:26 PM (GMT)
Beautiful poem, it makes you think, great job ^^

love you

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