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Title: Dream Attraction
Description: NC-16 lol


gossipgirl - June 15, 2006 05:50 AM (GMT)
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You're a dream.

Dreams release certain energies.
Bottling them up could result in a rewarding dream.

He looks me in the eye, doesn't have to say a word.
Comes and sits beside me,
all the uncertainty is heard.

I carefully link my arm with his,
Bravery getting
The best of me.

Sudden sensation
With reference to a swan
Surprises me.

I turn my head
Electric waves,
Shot through me.

Squeeze his mouth
Honeyed up,
No pretenses.

Every move savoured.

But it was only a dream.

A rewarding dream.


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I hope my family doesn't see this. Lol. Yes, this comes from my own dream, teehee lol. I wonder if this is suitable for the YWC... oh well.

lakegurl93 - June 15, 2006 07:03 AM (GMT)
hahaha, nice. It's actually very well written. The words flow really well and it created good imagery at the begining, could have used more toward the end.

gossipgirl - June 16, 2006 04:09 AM (GMT)
thank yer, i'll work on it.

Anwen - June 16, 2006 04:50 PM (GMT)
Gorgous! I loved it, v sweet :)

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