I Remember.
Do you remember a time,
when teacher's pets were popular
and bad kids were frowned on?
When people actually liked their friends,
and fights were forgotten after five minutes?
I remember.
Do you remember a time,
when there were nice people on the street,
ones who smiled and waved,
or even gave the occasional "Hey, how are you doing today?"?
I remember.
Do you remember a time,
when good was good,
and bad was bad?
When the evil guy was defeated by the good guy,
and that put the world at peace?
I remember.
Do you remember a time,
When hot still ment warm,
and slutty wasn't attractive.
When people ate three square meals a day,
plus ice cream?
I remember.
I remember,
do you?
ok...i liked this. has a very colloquial feel to it.
however, change the first stanza, i think. not very engaging. other than that... good.
I switched around the order. What do you think?
much better, i really like it alot now.
This is by far my favorite poem ever submitted here.
Thanks Marie!!
September, that is sooooo sweet!! Thank you soooo much!