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Title: Vacancy
Description: please, please comment!


Alexandria - May 29, 2006 03:44 AM (GMT)
Shake me.
Wake me.
Love me.
Hold me.

I don't feel you.
Shake harder.
Hold tighter.

I'm going faster.
You can see.
Vacancy.

On my face and in my heart.
Love me.
Maybe you can't see,
not beyond the vacancy.

Pain.
Misery.
Sorrow.
Depression.
Worthlessness.
Existentialism.

Do I feel these things?
No.
Do I see them?
No.
Do I hear them? Sense them?
No.

I am them.
And they are me.

When I close my eyes there is nothing.
Vacancy.
Filled with
pain
misery
sorrow
depression
worthlessnes
Existentialism.
I am them and they are me.

Show me love.
Hold me.
Maybe your embrace will wake me.
Overtake me.
Recreate me.
Rearrange the vacancy.

Mimi - May 30, 2006 01:21 AM (GMT)
thats really good! :)

Hi.... :lol: :D

gossipgirl - May 31, 2006 11:46 AM (GMT)
crafted nicely, a lot of power, liked it:)

btw, did you mean existentialist?

Alexandria - June 1, 2006 06:02 AM (GMT)
Oops, *blushes. I'm not the best speller when I rush, and honestly, I wrote this very quickly. I fixed it though, thanks for telling me. And thanks for your comments guys, as always.




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