The look on your face, it scared me.
Your eyes were suddenly swimming with pools of crystal water.
Your scream, it shocked me.
As you choked with suprise and horror at the sight before you.
Your hands covered your mouthas if you felt sick.
Your knees buckled and you hit the floor with a thud that shook me.
You were reflected in the bits of glass that were strewn across the floor.
20,000 faces ried out just when you did.
As you looked onwarn with all the sorrow in the world.
My heart shattered when i saw you in such a way.
you cradled my head and held my hand which was sticky with blood.
Losing all controll, your heart shattered, just like mine had, into a thousand little pieces.
Good. Morbid, but I definitely liked it
i love the imaginative descriptions... but again, i want you to express how you feel through images, dont just tell me.
GOOD job though!