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Title: My Short Poems


MissDreamer - May 25, 2005 06:58 PM (GMT)
I thought it was love
I thought you were true
But the only thing there is now
Is me feeling blue

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I loved the way you were
And the way you loved me too
But I guess I didn't realize
That you were too good to be true

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My dreams conquer my fears
my fears conquer my dreams
Sometimes I just can't understand
Why everything isn't as it seems

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I knew it couldn't happen
I knew you were too good to be true
Life's just one big lie
And it's all because of you


*So, what do you think?

Marzipan - May 26, 2005 01:24 AM (GMT)
I liked it. (or is it them? Are they separate? They all seem to be connected) Very clear message.

MissDreamer - May 27, 2005 04:47 PM (GMT)
Actually, now that you've said that...They are all connected in some way. Weird.

September - June 13, 2005 06:40 PM (GMT)
Yes, very clear message. It actually sounds sort of like the way my ex-boyfriend feels about me. I liked them. Very good rhymes.

hockeylover - June 15, 2005 04:50 AM (GMT)
Very good :) They do all seem connected though but that is ok. It's wonderful keep up the good work :D




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