Title: My Way
Description: my first attempt at writing a song...
lakegurl93 - April 17, 2006 08:46 PM (GMT)
This is my first time writing a song. Sorry that it sucks.
To you I'm just another,
face in the crowd.
Just a shadow who will,
hold you down.
Why don't you just take a chance,
And shoot a glance,
My way.
My Way.
My Way.
You know if I'd had my way we'd be married by now,
and have two kids and a house in Beverly Hills.
We could be happy,
Surviving on love.
But now we have two lives,
instead of one.
And now
To you I'm just another,
face in the crowd.
Just a shadow who will,
hold you down.
Why don't you just take a chance,
And shoot a glance,
My way.
My Way.
My Way.
Tell me with a straight face on,
that you don't love me anymore.
I know you can't say it like that,
'Cause I know you want me back.
So why won't you just admit it?
Oh wait I forgot,
It's because you're too much,
Of a man.
And now you pretend,
that
To you I'm just another,
face in the crowd.
Just a shadow who will,
hold you down.
Why don't you just take a chance,
And shoot a glance,
My way.
My Way.
My Way.
Do you remember those old fairy tales?
Where knights in shining armour rescued the girls?
You were my brave,
handsome prince,
Who saved me from the wicked witch
But now I'm back with her and it's ten times worse.
'Cause there's no hope of you coming back,
to me.
Since obviously
To you I'm just another,
face in the crowd.
Just a shadow who will,
hold you down.
Why don't you just take a chance,
And shoot a glance,
My way.
My Way.
My Way.
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FB please!!!
~*Athena*~ - April 18, 2006 12:26 AM (GMT)
It flows nicely, I actually sang along just to see what would come out and it sounded pretty good (the lyrics, not my voice. lol) Yeah, just the part about the prince and the wicked witch was a little bit unorigional for me. But good job on your first try writing a song!
lakegurl93 - April 18, 2006 02:13 AM (GMT)
Thanks! Yeah, the part with the fairy tales is unoriginal.
gossipgirl - April 18, 2006 04:14 PM (GMT)
Other than the fairy tales part and the second verse (not meaning the chorus part) it KICKED ASS! i looovethe chorsu
lakegurl93 - April 19, 2006 12:39 AM (GMT)
lol. Thanks!! By 2nd verse do you mean about the tell me with a straight face on that you don't love me anymore?
September - April 20, 2006 12:33 AM (GMT)
I absolutely loved it! I started crying at some parts.
lakegurl93 - April 20, 2006 02:11 AM (GMT)
Thanks!! Aww...that's so sweet!
gossipgirl - April 20, 2006 05:52 PM (GMT)
Yup, thats the part i meant! i sang to it! seriously babe it kicked the ass off todays celeb singer songwriters (well except marion raven lol)
lakegurl93 - April 23, 2006 05:32 AM (GMT)