My writing isn't all the good considering I'm a french grade 5 student. I don't know how to spell all that well. So I'll just be puting a few paragraph to see what you guys think.
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Chapter 1- Part 1

Mia was out near the river when she saw the leave starting to fall. It was wonderful, she was always cooped up inside her school house so she could never the seasons changing. The seas of red, orange and yellow were all new to her.

Mia was 10 years old and was already doing half of the chores at the farm. Her mother was doing the rest. Her father died when he was 5 so Mia had to take most of his reponsibility after the accident. The only other boys she knew was her best friend Mark.
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Okay how was it??? This my first story I'v ever posted on the internet and I have no idea if it was good.

Nice. I'm a pretty bad speller myself, but I copy the words that look
misspelled into Dictionary.com, or something like that. There's so
little there, it's hard to get a real grasp of the story. I'd like to
see more of it.

yes me too i agree with Marzipan