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Title: Fly In The Spider's Web
Description: the title is pretty self-explanitory


lakegurl93 - April 7, 2006 05:31 AM (GMT)
You are a fly.
You live your life tangled in a web.
The spider who caught you is coming closer.
Soon it will apear that she is going to finish you off quick.
But then again, maybe she's full.
And maybe she'll wait until you fall,
Fall the long way down to the ground.
Or maybe you'll fall beneath the ground,
To where scum like you belong.
No one likes you.
You were just caught by a spider and her web.
And now that she's had her fun watching you suffer,
She'll watch you fall...

gossipgirl - April 7, 2006 05:10 PM (GMT)
wow, i reeeeally liked this, it had sort of an evil, malicious feeling to it which I liked (lol ur scared now arentcha) keep it up!

lakegurl93 - April 9, 2006 05:26 AM (GMT)
lol. Thanks. It has a hidden meaning. I'll tell you what it is if I get two more responces




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