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Title: I Can Walk My Sea Alone
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gossipgirl - March 18, 2006 05:58 AM (GMT)
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Let me walk across a river
As you walk across the sea

I accomplish something
You seem to accomplish more

I find my window of opportunity
But you always find the door

So we had our class reunion
Familiarity in large amounts

But you talked only of trivial things
Flocking to me, they cleared my doubts

I left you with a message
Polite but not too cold

You sent one back
Highlighted; in bold

I don't want your friendship
I can walk my sea alone

But you'll still be waiting; backseat
While those "friends" listen to your tireless drone

lakegurl93 - March 18, 2006 07:53 PM (GMT)
it's great!!! ilove it!!!

gossipgirl - March 19, 2006 04:50 AM (GMT)
Thankiesssssss!!!!

Anwen - March 19, 2006 03:41 PM (GMT)
WOW! this my my new favourite of your poetry! It kicks ASS! great job!

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gossipgirl - March 20, 2006 08:14 AM (GMT)
hehehehe i love u peopel.... thanksey lol




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