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Title: Another way of feeling
Description: I know this might not seem very complete


gossipgirl - March 18, 2006 05:45 AM (GMT)
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A finger on my back
Running over smooth skin

A finger on my face
Just barely touching

A warm grip on my shoulder
Reassuring me

Lip to lip
It's all just another way of feeling

lakegurl93 - March 18, 2006 07:53 PM (GMT)
It's pretty good, but your other one was better

~*Athena*~ - April 1, 2006 03:12 PM (GMT)
I think this is pretty cool. Maybe it was just a spur of the moment feeling or maybe it was something that you've thought about a lot, but I can tell it's personal. I think that most poetry is written, not for others to understand, but for the author to express his/her thoughts. And that was a really interesting thought to me.




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