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Title: Hurt clouded by sun
Description: idk...i'm on a roll...


lakegurl93 - March 7, 2006 07:09 AM (GMT)
Did you know?

Did you know that everytime you look at me my heart breaks again

Did you know that everytime I think I'm over you the memories come back

Did you know that everytime I see you with her I'm jealous?

Did you know that even though I don't love you anymore, I do?

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If I had never looked in your eyes, I would have never known.

Your eyes told all,

all the hurt

all the clouds

all the fake sun


Those eyes,

blue and icy yet warm and inviting.

How could I say no? I loved you then...

but it's all different now.

The eyes started it all.

All the confusion

All the pain

All the lies

You lied to me.
You used me.
You hurt me more than you know.

You said it wasn't so, but I know it was,
I always knew, I didn't want to admit it, but I knew.

It was the eyes.

The sun in them when you saw me clouded the hurt and hate

Until the one day when the true sun shone.

She walked in the door and I saw true sunlight in your eyes and knew,

I knew, she was the sun and I was the cloud, the cloud you wanted to blow away

Just like on a rainy day that seems to have no end.

That was your life, a rainy day, with no end...that is, until you let the sun be pushed away.

And the true ice in your eyes show through, bright blue.

Anwen - March 7, 2006 09:49 AM (GMT)
:o I love this! It's almost like a song, go you!

X

lakegurl93 - March 8, 2006 03:09 AM (GMT)
Thanks!!

~*Athena*~ - March 10, 2006 09:01 PM (GMT)
that was really really good! :D

lakegurl93 - March 11, 2006 05:06 AM (GMT)
Thanks!!
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gossipgirl - March 17, 2006 02:19 PM (GMT)
colly babe, that was beeeyoootiful lol. you should be a songwriter, these are made for songs, meanwhiel, im humming the tunes in my head! lol

lakegurl93 - March 18, 2006 05:05 AM (GMT)
lol maybe i'll try a song next time....

~*Athena*~ - April 1, 2006 03:04 PM (GMT)
This is fantastic! I loved it.




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