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Title: Who, What, Where, When, and Why
Description: My 1st attempt at writing decent poetry


lakegurl93 - March 6, 2006 08:12 AM (GMT)
[center]Who, What, Where, When, and Why[/center]

Who
Why the who is you

What
Why the what is how you devided my heart into depression and hate

Where
Why the where is everywhere you were with me

When
Why the when is everytime you were with me

Why
Why the why is that I let you do all of this too me, when i knew, it would come to no good.

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[center]Love[/center]

Love

Love
Strong and powerful

Love
Repairing and Wonderful

Love
Fastinating and joyful

Love

Love
Weak and powerless

Love
Hurtful and terrible

Love
Boring and depressing

Love

Love
How the world works


Anwen - March 6, 2006 06:27 PM (GMT)
wow i love this, very powerful, yet very true

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lakegurl93 - March 7, 2006 05:28 AM (GMT)
Thanks...I don't really know where it came from, I just sorta wrote it...

gossipgirl - March 17, 2006 02:15 PM (GMT)
OMG. COLLYWODDLE. WHO KNEW WE HAD SUCH A POETESS IN THERE! lol i loved it, though frankly it's more of a song... I actually made up a tune to it. and i only do that for really decent stuff ;)

lakegurl93 - March 18, 2006 05:03 AM (GMT)
THANKIES!!!!




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