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Title: Black Rain
Description: Stains...


gossipgirl - February 10, 2006 03:59 PM (GMT)
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Black rain
Stains

Tell me I'm stupid
Retarded one more time

Make me feel inadequate
Compare one more time

Black rain
Stains

Tell me I'm ugly
Abhorr one more time

Make me feel revolting
Tease one more time

Black rain
Stains

Stains the victim's heart
Stains it till it's dark

Dark with lost blood
Dark with sad horror

Black rain
Stains

~*Athena*~ - April 1, 2006 03:14 PM (GMT)
oh my gosh, I loved this! I've read a couple of your things now, and I really love the way you exemplify your feelings. The personification of the black rain was really powerful.

gossipgirl - April 6, 2006 01:09 PM (GMT)
omg, thank you so much, i adore your comments, theyre really well thought out




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