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Title: Make It Loud


Jackson [Break] - February 9, 2006 11:33 PM (GMT)
Numbed from a distance by the beat of the night
We were holding fast and I was 8 years old again
Curled into your form, removed from the thought
Lost tonight cause I break every time I cry
But they’re still angry, for too many nights
And the problem drinker don't care about us anymore
Shut my eyes and I was 8 years old again
Call my name from a distance and I'm finally lost for tonight

gossipgirl - February 10, 2006 08:33 AM (GMT)
i can feel the emotion of this one... is this written from personal experience

Black-Kat - March 17, 2006 06:51 PM (GMT)
Great poem,kind of sad though.

~*Athena*~ - April 1, 2006 03:08 PM (GMT)
I loved this. I don't know 100% of what's going on, but I can feel the emotion. That's what a real poem is, it makes you think.




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