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Title: Tunnels


Jackson [Break] - February 9, 2006 11:27 PM (GMT)
Revealed, present underneath and burned out
Covered and concealed
Blast out, silent alarms-
Threatened softly to make your heart beat faster

Gorgeously chaotic, letdown productions-
Ice storms and crooked power lines
Black out, snow-covered district-
Idealistically romantic, despairingly hopeless

Layered and pounded with clipped vocals
Mechanical, power out-
Artistically captured, futility and discomfort
Melodic, rendered so-

Alternatively grand, epic-
Loosely narrarated and affected with lies
Sound systems push out fears and dreams
The collision is beautiful

Remixed with synthetic beats, stand up-
Pulsing tunnels, generated so-
Explosive and redemptive
Pumping underground, bang, bang-

gossipgirl - February 10, 2006 08:34 AM (GMT)
i love how you think of all these metaphors...incredible




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