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Title: Romance, I suppose.


XOXO - January 8, 2006 05:04 PM (GMT)
Cobblestones on a sidestreet
A hansom cab
A borrowed jacket
Wide dark eyes
And small light smiles-
the Rain.
It comes and comes from the stars
We're drenched
And that's okay.
Splashing puddles
And clinging hair to skin
And giggles that bounce off-
Cobblestones on a sidestreet.
A storm came-
Hard and fast
It hurt but I
relented
And now it's 2 AM
You're sleeping.
Your chest moves with your breath
But the T.V. clicks on-
Black & White pictures-
moving-
a man & woman in trenchcoats.
A storm came.
It's over now.
There were two spoons
One pint of Ben & Jerry's
A single couch
IN a beat-up flat
One broadcasting
blazing vison of
old flickering films
You & I
In the dark-
With spoons and
each other.
Delusions of boys with
guitars
in cafes in Paris
In bookstores reaching for
leather bounds-
Delusions of romantics
of glamour and grandeur
Quaint fags hanging out the
corner of mouths
And scrawling
poetry
on a page.

:ph43r: What do you think? Oh, and if anyone was wondering, "fags" is an archaic British term for cigarettes. I'm American, but the word fits better there. :P

gossipgirl - January 9, 2006 04:21 PM (GMT)
Dude I SERIOUSLY LOVE IT!!!! This has to be one of my faves!


I love the way you phrased everything, made me remember what it was like to walk along the streets of Paris when I was 7 and my love of this idea of old, which is "go to the cafe, go to a poetry reading and then go home to ahem (lol)" times ... thanks for the incredible poem



XOXO - January 12, 2006 11:56 PM (GMT)
:D Thanks again...I'm madly jealous of you....Paris... :blink: the reason I write so much about romantic places is because I've gone nowhere....I want to travel so much! Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

gossipgirl - January 13, 2006 07:08 AM (GMT)
lolol dont be jealous...one day i'll send you on a world tour...lol :D




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