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Title: You're Different


gossipgirl - December 18, 2005 09:11 PM (GMT)
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You're different
Far from what I expected

Are there secrets behind your high unpenetrated wall
A complex jungle of interwoven secrets

Is there something out of your reach
Something more wrong in your world than expected

Did I ever really know you
Are you less of a stranger than I imagined

I realise you're not really perfect
And deep down you cry

Anwen - December 18, 2005 09:59 PM (GMT)
kwl 1, short but sweet

luvz ya
Anwen
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September - December 19, 2005 03:45 PM (GMT)
That was really good. :D

FireGuardian - December 27, 2005 01:25 PM (GMT)
I really like it. It's simple and clearly understood, but thoughtful and reflective at the same time.

gossipgirl - December 28, 2005 01:04 PM (GMT)
Wow thats exactly how i wanted it to be...you read my mind...thanks




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