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Title: I'm Waiting For The Rain
Description: A very strange style I haven't used


gossipgirl - December 14, 2005 08:47 AM (GMT)
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I'm waiting for the rain
When does it come

I'm not waiting for the type that taps on your window pane
A sweet song with quick light notes

I'm not waiting for the type that is cold and hard
An old man devoid of feeling

I'm not waiting for the type that comes in spring
A ceremony of new life and rebirth

I'm waiting for the rain
When does it come

I'm waiting for the type that is all-consuming
A rhapsody for my emotions

I'm waiting for the type that is soft and warm
A welcomed blanket of embrace

I'm waiting for the type that comes in your winter
A thunderstorm for when all is lost

I'm waiting for my tears, the rain of my heart
For my heart is shattered

I'm still waiting for the rain
When does it finally come

Anwen - December 14, 2005 09:10 PM (GMT)
O.O LOVE IT! it was how powerful! WOW!

luvz ya
Valda
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gossipgirl - December 15, 2005 06:57 AM (GMT)
thanks!!!! lol THAT was unexpected

September - December 15, 2005 08:26 PM (GMT)
That was awesome! Great job! lol

gossipgirl - December 16, 2005 05:32 AM (GMT)
thanks guys!




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