Title: poems
Description: by the greatest poetess ever
eden lyket - May 24, 2005 02:56 PM (GMT)
I had a bit of time rating it So, PG is what I went with.
limits
Limits, set by you.
Limits, not by me.
Limits, there are so many,
They make me.......
cry......
somethimes I sit,
ready to die,
just waiting, not to fly.
I wanna get away, no point in staying.
But no ones know me.
They all "forget". That's what they say.
I don't beleave them.
Why should I?
Limits, set by everyone.
Limits, set by everyone...... but me.
Marzipan - May 24, 2005 08:18 PM (GMT)
There's not really a need to rate the poems. (I mean, like G, PG, etc.) Although maybe there should be?
Anyway, nice poem. You might want to work on spelling. For instance, "limts" is spelled "limits." (if I'm thinking of the right word) Of course, maybe I'm just setting limits for you. ;)
eden lyket - May 24, 2005 09:03 PM (GMT)
September - June 13, 2005 06:47 PM (GMT)
Great poem! By the way, clever siggy!
eden lyket - June 17, 2005 06:10 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Marzipan @ May 24 2005, 08:18 PM) |
There's not really a need to rate the poems. (I mean, like G, PG, etc.) Although maybe there should be?
Anyway, nice poem. You might want to work on spelling. For instance, "limts" is spelled "limits." (if I'm thinking of the right word) Of course, maybe I'm just setting limits for you. ;) |
OK, OK, AUNT JO. I EDITED IT. :P Rock on, cuz it's a song.
(Also, there IS sort of a poem rating. Some ppl write about death - that gets them a PG-13.)
MissDreamer - July 2, 2005 07:13 PM (GMT)
Really good. Oh, another thing. You spelled believe wrong. Just to let you know. :P
eden lyket - August 19, 2005 08:55 PM (GMT)