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Title: It's All Plastic
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gossipgirl - December 5, 2005 09:58 AM (GMT)
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It's all plastic
Can't you see past the shiny surface

Behind my own eyes
Tears hurt even more than the beating

But nobody cared
Wet lashes made zero impact

My face remains sallow
You life remains shallow
That's all living will ever mean

Smiles can chase the stormclouds away
Or so a little girl told me

Well she is dead
Merely a fragment of a dream

I ride on the dragon of hope
It has yet to make me feel steady

Anwen - December 5, 2005 04:37 PM (GMT)
wow thas amazin, and so tru!

luvz ya
The queen of ranting!
Anwen
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September - December 6, 2005 07:21 PM (GMT)
Really good

gossipgirl - December 7, 2005 04:28 PM (GMT)
OMG!!! SEPTEMBER!!! YOU'RE BACK!!!! YAY!!!! HOW ARE YOU!!!

September - December 7, 2005 06:05 PM (GMT)
Lol. Have I been gone that long?

gossipgirl - December 8, 2005 09:50 AM (GMT)
TOO LONG!!!!! AHH IM GOING TO SMOTHER YOU IN A BEAR HUG!!!!!!! *HUGZ!!!*

gossipgirl - December 8, 2005 10:05 AM (GMT)
TOO LONG!!!!! AHH IM GOING TO SMOTHER YOU IN A BEAR HUG!!!!!!! *HUGZ!!!*

By the way, happy birthday!!!! sorry i cant post on the stupid tag board

September - December 12, 2005 05:59 PM (GMT)
Hey! Thanks. Lol. *Hugs back*

gossipgirl - December 12, 2005 06:36 PM (GMT)
omigosh yays! so whatcha been up to sept

September - December 12, 2005 10:32 PM (GMT)
N2M. Just chatting on MySpace and some forums.

gossipgirl - December 13, 2005 01:08 PM (GMT)
all right...coolness...whats ur myspace?

September - December 14, 2005 11:30 PM (GMT)
myspace.com/axle37

gossipgirl - December 15, 2005 06:55 AM (GMT)
okay i'll add you!




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