To give you an idea. Its Transformers, meets Zoid and Gundam. Rules are no super weapons that can blow up half of a planet, and be realistic. And abide by the rules of this forum.

Story

Its 5350 man made movements in the galaxy and have reach far beyond space and have made many colonies. Man has grown how it was so post to. As for peace, far from it. War has broken and caused the governments to crumble. Having so the people have to rely on them selves. Villages on planets have made there own military for there own protection against any threats that would come there way

The Beginning of this wars started with the creation of these Techno Suits. Be for they were just in a robot like form. Now the these Techno suit are allowing the pilot to transform into 3 different forms Robot, Animal, and Vehicle. Before they were just used for tournaments, and arena battles where the battlers would on disable the Techno Pilots suit. But once a subscriber of the match payed to see more violence, everything safe about the game broke out. Thus the war broke out.

Now its a fight for survival. Gangs are formed, Currency is the only language to be spoken among every one, and the Techno Suits are being manufactured everyday, on many planets. Many Suit come in many designs. Mercenaries are more and more on demand. While smuggling it is even more of risky job, but the pay is extremely well.

So what is your place in this life. What will you do. More importantly do you think you will survive.

Techno Suits

They are a large robotic like Mechs. It is one big weapon of mass destruction that transform in to 3 forms as list in the story (Robot, Animal, and Vehicle). Techno Suits are only one man pilot. However passengers and cargo can be carried on a Techno Suit. There size is a giant compared to a human, Measuring about 10 feet tall in animal model. They come in many designs for vehicle and animal model, and there robot model design depend on there animal, and vehicle mode.

Weapons and Gadgets
When a Techno Suit is first made, its weapons and gadgets are determined by the buyer. Some will do there best to buy the strongest powered punched guns. While some go for something different. There are many kinds of gadget, but a Techno suit can only carry 2 gadgets. While weapons wise will depend on the size of the weapons. say pistol like guns max of 4. Rifle would count as a 2 handed weapon. Also the weapons would change and be mounted on to the suit in it animal, and vehicle form making it deadly in battle in all forms.

I.A. Construct
They were first made to determine when the Techno Suit would reach it limit and freeze the systems. Now they serve as the pilot's library, many other uses according to how it was programed. Some have been out in the galaxy for so long they developed quirky personalities. Some Pilots have trusted the A.i. to keep them sane through long travels. A.I.'s are extremely expensive and very hard to get a hold of now and days. One would have to have spend everything they own to even get the cheapest A.I. installed one Techno Suit. Pilots can live with one, however a pilot will never pass on getting an A.i. when it is offered to em.

Controling a Techno Suit
In Robot mode the pilot has a one large room where the Robot move according to the pilot's movements. He stands at the center of the room and he never moves from there. He where a helmet that allow s/he to see every thing the Robot sees and holographic imagery will form around the pilot and will be able to feel the weapons around. In Animal and Vehicle mode its just a plan Cockpit, the room in Robot mode is known as the cockpit as well. Where is located is unknown. It is common how ever for the cockpit to be located at the head of of each mode. But some have been know to be located in other areas.

Character's Name: Loque Sage

Gender: Male

Age: 20

Character appearance: Loque

History:
Was Born on a back water planet that was a junk yard for broken Techno Suits. Was also where he learned the trade of engineering. He took the parts of a Techno Suit to build his own custom Techno Suit. Been building it since he was 12. been at it ever since. Once he reached the age of 17 he was able to finish his Techno Suit and leave the planet he was on

Personality:
Loque is a stubborn fellow, and a bit of a rogue. He has often clamed that he is looking out for number one. But at many time his action have proven to say, that he is a trust worthy and loyal friend. He is a major flirt with girls, and he doesn’t care who or what they are. He like to get to know a girl personally than intimately, and if he likes there company, He will want to be with them again. The rogue part of his character kicks in when he is given an order that does not make sense to him; he will not hesitate to disobey it. Loque takes on more of a personality of an anti-hero. Even though there is a noble part to him, he is still lacking certain areas of his character.

He doesn’t judge anyone on there past only on what they do in the present. His greatest annoyance is when he sees some one judge another person and condemns them based off what they judge, even when they don’t even know what they are talking about. Yet still he tries respect people even when they disrespect him, and tries to keeping things cool. Also he is not afraid to get physical with some one who forcing another person to do something that they don’t want to do. At least he has the urge to step in and stop them from doing that. But if he sees some one disrespecting another person he greatly respects, expect a big fight to break out and Loque being in the middle of it.

Abilities:
Loque has always had a nack for taking things apart to see how they work then make attempts to put them back together (which he mostly successful). His mind works a different way from other people and has found it easy to understand a situation; both involve technology and people. If some one says it is impossible to repair he can say other wise until he is 100% sure it can’t be fixed.

Sense his major skill in engineering, Loque has specialized in gadget and weapons crafting. Having so he can advance weapons even make so the he can infuse to weapons together for different uses, like how a grapple is attached to a gun, Loque can make a blade infuse with a gun.

Loque has a heightened perception of surroundings in relation to himself. This would allow him to judge distances accurately and to be aware of more than one version of reality. For example, Loque might be able to have unusual balance and coordination on high or narrow structures, and jump from place to place without missing a step.

Possessions

Weapons: -Blasters that can be switched and changed into Beamblade

Others: -Goggles

Techno Suit

Animal Mode: Wolfeagle

Robot Mode: Archangel

Vehicle Mode: Star Ship

Weapons: The Techno Suit weapons are entirely plasma based. The wings fire plasma based projectiles, and the wrist project a plasma based shields where the shape and size appear how the pilot has designed it. the edges of the shield are lethal to cut into many kinds of material.

A.I. Construct: Cybrina was found among the scraps that Loque digged into. According to her systems she has been off line for about 50 years meaning that that she is not up to date does not know what has happened within the last fifty years. But the rest of her history is still intact, along with Scanners, Com channels, damage assessment and her quirky personality.

Character's Name: Guy Baita

Gender: Male

Age: 22

Character appearance: http://natemh.deviantart.com/art/Guy-collab-6500222

History: Guy was born the son of self proclaimed royalty. His parents were both extremely rich and had many allies with high military positions on many worlds as well as owning much land, including most of a small planet and several moons. All his life he was given everything on a silver platter, usually before he even had to ask for it. Eventually he became sick and tired of all the pampering and actually wanted to achieve something for himself. His parents however dissaproved and told him he should be gratefull for everything they gave him. Eventually, at the age of 17 he ran away, stealing his fathers extremely expensive, yet rarely used Techno Suit as well as a lot of money.
Shortly after this he was attacked by a band of ex military men in stolen military techno suits who realised who he was and knew they could get much money by holding him for ransom. Although Guy did eventually beat them, his suit was so badly damaged that he had to make an emergency landing on a small planet for repairs. Here he spent all of his money repairing his Techno Suit as best he could. However it would never be the same without excess ammounts of money. Since then, to get money to live by, he began hiring himself out as a merc.

Personality: Although not taught it by his parents, he has an understanding of what is right and wrong. He will far sooner chose a job for a good cause for less money than the other way around. He dislikes pointless conflict, but will fight for a cause or will even on occation go against his own personality and fight solely for money if he is in need enough. When possible he will avoid any military of any kind in case they know his parents and recognise him or his Techno Suit

Abilities: He can perform basic repairs to a Techno Suit, especially his own.

Possessions

Weapons: http://prinzeugn.deviantart.com/art/Future-Pistol-56441463

Others: NA

Techno Suit

Animal Mode: http://vegah2.deviantart.com/art/Konig-Wolf-Proteus-62880287

Robot Mode: http://killerwhut.deviantart.com/art/Armor...raphim-74088305

Vehicle Mode: http://ashlik.deviantart.com/art/terran-ba...ruiser-41446219

Weapons:
In Robot Mode it has its plasma rifle which emits charged beams of plasma energy, meaning it takes a moment between each shot. Its left wrist has a beam blade for close combat. Its "wings" can flip up, each firing powerful balls of plasma, but this takes away its ability to fly in this mode.

In Animal Mode, the "wings" from the Robot mode have come together from either side, forming to two plasma gatling guns. The rifle is also mounted on one side but is less accurate, as its in a fixed position, while the gatling guns can move, tracking an opponent. The beam blade is in the tail, and can be activited to prevent an opponent attacking from behind.

In vehicle mode, the six individual "wing" guns have been moved so 4 are in the front and the other 2 are on either wing. The rifle is also in the centre of the 4 at the front.

A.I. Construct: Zerxeuss was an old AI altered specifically for Guys father, something that he was very proud of as it was one of the most (if not the most) expensive things he had, never mind that he never used it. When not in a battle situation Guy tends to turn Zerxeuss off as it/he always advises Guy to return home to his father. Zerxeuss has a somewhat imperial nature, reminding Guy much of his father, but is invaluable in a battle.







Tell me if ive gotta change something.

everything seems ok. I'd say change the saying that the Techno suit extremely powerful. Thats pushing it in my opinion.

I was just saying it was extremely powerful before its near destruction. After he fought those Ex-military guys they almost took him out and really badly damaged his suit. So now its nowhere near as powerful as it used to be because he couldnt afford the same super expensive parts.
If you still want me to change it I will though.

Yes I want it changed.

Saying that it was expensive is enough to make it sound like it was powerful and has these high tech weapons on it. But saying it is powerful is a double negative in my opinion so please take the part where it says it is powerful out of the picture.

Okies, its done ^^

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