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Title: She's So Beautiful...bd Tries Again
Description: Such a Beautiful Disaster...


sassaboo - July 25, 2007 11:44 PM (GMT)
Do you feel like a man when you push her around?
Do you feel better now as she falls to the ground?
Well I'll tell you my friend, one day this world's going to end
as your lies crumble down, a new life she has found.

The words explained her past, the past of the beautiful Friesian mare. With her neck arched, her extremely long forelock covered her hazel eyes. In the sunlight, she gleamed as sunlight reflected off her sweaty ebony coat. At night, she blended in...Being the terrifying demon she truly was, stalking wanderers until the right moment came for their screams to fill the night. The young mare was gorgeous to look at, not so pretty to get along with...Beautiful Disaster was name known far and wide, Disaster the more commonly known name... Many called her a heartless creature of the night, some swear her very voice could seduce you to your death...Were these tall tales true? Well she had a heart, but very rarely had she ever shown it. As for her personality, well, stallions beware...

Feathered hooves carried the mare gracefully across the Shadowlands, in search of a poor little stallion that could think he has a chance with her. Cold hazel eyes searched with boredom, resting a hoof on its tip while she waited... Her odd season would come soon, for the second time this year. Yes, she had two seasons, another advantage to her habit of flirting up stallions. Oh yes, she could be quite the temptress, but sooner or later Disaster would end up with plans gone wrong....

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That was a year ago, when little did she know that her plans would go wrong. Terribly wrong... She had agreed to be in the harem of Agni, but this agreement along with her flirtatious plans backfired. Instead of being taken to the herd lands first, she had been immediately brought to the Willow Grove in which she had been raped by her so called King. Ended up carrying his foal, she gave birth to a filly. Only now, Agni rejected the filly, wanting a colt instead. To save both her daughter and possibly her own self, she had threatened to kill Agni's son. Now, rejected and banned from the Ancient Canyons, she had to find a new home for herself and her young daughter...

Who could accept a once flirtatious mare, full of spirit and destructive plans, who was know a mother with her daughter, still gorgeous but even more disgusted by stallions than ever. Who would accepted this Beautiful Disaster...

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Scrimpy - July 26, 2007 12:24 AM (GMT)
I had followed Mumma to these strange grounds. Their ominous and scary. I blend in and out with my white and black coat. I stick close to her for I know stallions would kill me just to get to my Mumma. I'm gonna stay by her though. I know she cares for after rescuing me from Agni and I'm often showing my affection by rubbing against her pelt and grinning up to her brightly. My mane has grown a little too. It's long and is starting to choose a side to flop or sway to more often. I hope my mane becomes beautiful as Mumma's someday. I'm gonna keep quiet though. I don't wanna screw up for Mumma's sake.

Horsegirl - July 26, 2007 01:36 AM (GMT)
The obsidian stallion loped through the land, easily continuing the fast pace despite his 18-hand frame. Midnight whipcord swirled behind his bod, same as his locks behind his crest. Onyx thorns pricked and swiveled to catch the sounds, and dark crimson occuli burned with a fierce hate.

He hadn't always be like this. He used to be kind and forgiving to others, a light. But then....she rejected him. She rejected him while carrying his foal, and he hadn't seen her since. But memories brought him back...

The mare was nine months pregnant. Her belly swayed with her movement as she bared her teeth at him. "I hate you. Go. Go and leave me and your horrible spawn. I'll kill it anyway." He hadn't known why she had turned on him, but he left, never to return. True to her word, she had killed the foal...by killing herself. She'd run herself off a cliff.

He didn't like remembering that fateful day, but now he knew why she had hated him. He had had a fire burning in his heart, concealed only by his happiness at his almost fatherhood and his bride. But when she turned against him, it came out as a hate for all things. As an urge to do horrible things: forcebreed mares, then leave them. He had done it a few times, and always felt a sense of satisfaction when he had done the deed. It always left him eager for next time. He couldn't help it, though. It was her that had made him become this way. And it was almost too late to go back to the old him, the old Black Onyx.

Now he stopped and sniffed the air with jet-black nares. Hmmm. He could smell a banshee somewhere. Perfect. He smirked in his evil way. He only wanted her to be his mate and to carry a foal of his, since he had lost his first to its mother. That was just his mindset. Not caring about any relationships or getting to know any mares. Just grabbing them, forcebreeding them, and going on his merry way. He planned on hanging around the Willow Grove a bit too. See if there were any unsuspecting mares there. But he continued on after the scent.

He came to a halt a few strides from her and noticed the filly at her side. Good. That meant that when she was old enough, he had one more mare in his little harem. He stepped forward, trying to block the adult's path. "I am Black Onyx. Who might you be?"

sassaboo - July 26, 2007 01:47 AM (GMT)
At the arrival of yet another brute, I pinned my auds back. I made sure I could feel Witch beside me, and keep her away from the brute. Joy, he was even larger than Agni had been. It was one of the few times I actually cursed my beauty and was grateful I wasn't in heat just yet. I bared my teeth at him, having no interest in him in general, I just needed a place to stay now. I stomped my hoove warningly, to prove I was not in the mood to be tested. "Beautiful Disaster, and my daughter Witch." I hissed, stepping back from the large brute.

Horsegirl - July 26, 2007 02:16 AM (GMT)
"Nice names," he grunted in response. He watched as Disaster tucked her filly closer to her side. Protective measure. But if the mare was thinking it, Onyx didn't have any intention of doing something with her. Yet. That could wait, since she wasn't in heat or anything. "What's a pretty lass like you doin' out here all alone, with a filly too? It's kind of dangerous, seeing as some other stallions might come kill her. I wouldn't, though. Got no use for killing mares' foals, no matter who their sire."

Scrimpy - July 26, 2007 02:23 AM (GMT)
My ears pinned as I heard his words. A deep snort echoed from me as I looked back to my mother worringly. I didn't like this Onyx either. Instead, I pressed my small against her's as I tried to hunker down beneath her belly for protection. No, this was bad. It even showed as my lower jaw parted uncertiantly as I looked up to Mumma with green eyes reflecting bad things. I looked down to the ground before charging out in fornt of Mumma. "You no hurt, Mumma!" I said in my few moments of courage. Then his immense size came to him. My head sunk and tail remained bent inwards as I moved slowly back to Mumma's side. If only it had lasted...

sassaboo - July 26, 2007 02:32 AM (GMT)
"Her sire almost killed her after raping me to have her." I spat, lashing my tail back and forth like an angry cat. Watching as Witch darted out, I glared for Onyx to dare try something. With her back to my side, I relaxed only slightly. "I need a home for I was banned from the Canyons for protecting her and almost killing the heir. Not a mate. Not a harem master. A place to stay, nothing more nothing less." I raised my crown with self pride, I had to start picking up the pieces of my old self sooner or later, better make it sooner. I didn't give a damn anymore if I had to look up to a stallion, after what happened to me, they couldn't do anything worse now.

Horsegirl - July 26, 2007 02:51 AM (GMT)
The brute chuckled at the filly's words, but then frowned when her courage failed her. "You can't just back down like that, sweetheart," he said, attempting to talk gently, which was difficult to do. "Shows that you can't go through with any threats. Not a good quality." Then he looked up to talk to her mother. "Well, I can't say I've got a place for you. But I could help you find one." Obsidian auds pricked forward to hear her response. "That is, if you'd let me."

sassaboo - July 26, 2007 02:57 AM (GMT)
I lowered my boa to sheild Witch from Onyx as he tried speaking to her, whickering bitterly. Help me search for a home? I could easily do that on my own, even with Witch by my side. "I for one think it would be easier to search myself or wait here. Nothing personal, but if you don't have a place for us to stay, then I want nothing to do with you or any other stallions in the same situation." I snorted, backing away a couple steps from the brute while making sure Witch backed up with me.

Horsegirl - July 26, 2007 03:05 AM (GMT)
The stallion bared his ivories. "You sure? Last chance, because that was my good side. If you don't accept my offer....well, it's not going to be pretty. Take it now." He laid his thorns back and took a few steps forward to match Disaster's steps back. There was no way he would let this mare go now. He'd forceclaim her, if it came to that. he wouldn't just let her go. Not now. He was desperate.

sassaboo - July 26, 2007 03:14 AM (GMT)
"Or you'll what? Forcebreed me? Rape me? Because you just so damn desperate to get on top of a pretty mare because you can't get one by being a gentleman? And just to let you know, pretty must've left you a long time ago. Because I'll let you know right now, I am not going to let myself be forcebred for a third time." I spat to him, literally. Granted I had only been successfully forcebred once, I still continued a past love that betrayed me even though I got away before he could harm me. I raised a dagger, I'd put my fighting skills to the test in my defence. For all I new he could take both me and my daughter, wait for my daughter to age a couple years or so, then take advantage of her as well.

Horsegirl - July 26, 2007 03:24 AM (GMT)
"I probably will, if you don't let me go with you. If you do let me be with the two of you, nothing like that will happen." he snorted at her raised hoof. "And being physical won't get you far. You know that I'm a lot taller than you, and a lot more powerful. So don't even try." He took a few more steps forward, cranium and crest outstretched, ready to nip her: the signal of claimence of a mare.

sassaboo - July 26, 2007 03:32 AM (GMT)
"Height doesn't mean anything bastard. Besides, even if you claim me you cannot force me to the Willow Groves." I hissed, still backing up from him with my teeth bared. The moment he would decide to lash out, he'd get twice a harsh bite as well. I had a point, there was no way I would follow him to the breeding grounds. And he certianly couldn't drag me no matter how powerful he was.

Horsegirl - July 26, 2007 03:43 AM (GMT)
He smirked. "Don't be so sure. There are ways that stallions can get mares where they want them to go." Quick as a flash, he lunged and came up behind her, just out of kicking range. He came up close and nipped her hard, then retreated, attempting to not get kicked. But then his features softened as what she had said earlier sank in. Pretty must've left you a long time ago. "To tell you the truth, she did. I don't know why. She and my unborn foal left." He hoped she would swirl around and get him just then, while he remembered....

sassaboo - July 26, 2007 03:52 AM (GMT)
I screamed with rage at him, bucking out with instincts. Swinging around I still stayed close to Witch, the whites of my eyes showing as I glared at him. "So you take revenge on other innocent mares? Even mares with foals from forcebreeding... Your even more pathetically low than expected." He had claimed me harshly, but I was still going to make it difficult for him.

Horsegirl - July 27, 2007 01:03 AM (GMT)
The brute yelped quietly as the mare's hind pistons hit his chest. Hard. "I guess I'm not takin' any revenge on you two," he snarled. "Seeing as I can't even handle you. You go off and find your little home. But always watch your back." He began to trot away, but turned and looked at Witch and said in a nicer tone, "You watch your back, too. You never know who's going to be coming up behind you." And with a last glare at Disaster, he loped away.

sassaboo - July 27, 2007 01:09 AM (GMT)
I gave a grunt like snort as he left, auds still pinned as she watched to make sure he'd dissappear. Glancing down to Witch, I sighed. "Much as I hate to say it, he has a point. Never let your gaurd down." I said, looking around the claiming grounds. I can do better than this, I don't need some stallion to claim me in order to find a home. I knew here at the lands of Hopeless Hearts, mares were allowed to claim lands, at least for now...And that's exactly what I'll do. Starting to trot away from where Onyx had been, I headed off to the dark lands, nickering for Witch to follow.




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