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Title: Just An Ordinary Mare...
Description: Melinda x Onyx


sassaboo - November 12, 2007 07:22 PM (GMT)
It's bad enough to have to deal with seeing spirits, but the paranoia only grows now with expecting a foal. At least I found a home, an odd home, but a home nonetheless in which I could belong. A little less than a year ago, tears streamed down my face after taking the wrong path. And I ended up in this situation, carrying the foal of a rogue brute. What's worse, he was expecting to see my foal! Ugh, I felt sick for a moment. Or maybe it was just that morning sickness. Yeah, that had been tons of fun. What if he expected to breed again? If the foal was to his liking, or even if it wasn't, what if he'd want to try again? Who knows how many mares he had already taken advantage of, especially in which his haunting spirit seemed to know. I knew my time to foal was coming soon, so I left the Labyrinth a bit early so I oculd be here before-

"Agh!" Yeah, not much to say when it feels like someone is trying to tear you in half. Never before had I felt such pain, but as soon as it came, it was gone. Not for long though, another wave of searing pain brought me to my knees. I just needed to lay down, as though I knew that would end it all. I did feel a bit better after rolling onto my side, but it only lasted a short while. My breathing was heavy, and I dug into the earth as though the brute that put me through this was beneath by hooves. Ears flicked by into my tangled tresses, sweat built up upon my boa. I don't think I'll ever have another foal again. Whether if it's my choice or by force of that wretched stallion. Speaking of the devil, I began to wonder where he was. I couldn't see too well, my vision had blurred slightly.

Horsegirl - November 17, 2007 02:24 AM (GMT)
The brute trotted casually into the lands, for the third time. This was beginning to get old. Maybe he should stop. But still, it was in his nature to be mean, to forcebreed helpless mares, to be his awesome self. That stuff.

He glanced around, his gaze falling on the buckskin mare on the ground, her side rippling, yelping in pain. He watched calmly, indifferent to her pain. That's what comes with being in the wrong place at the wrong time, sweetie, he thought, smirking to himself.

sassaboo - November 17, 2007 10:52 PM (GMT)
I felt the presence of the haunting mare before I could see the blurred charcoal figure. Why if I could just give him a good swift kick in a certain spot, I garauntee you that smirk would wipe right off his disguistingly hideous face. While he held no sign of comfort, the mare that only I could see came up beside me and tried to talk me through this. Even mentioning that I should try to restrain my sounds of pain, as the fatso standing by me seemed to enjoy it. But when you get a small mare and a giant stallion to have a foal, it is /not/ going to be a little foal. At least not with me. After what seemed to be an enternity of pain and suffering, it all stopped. But I couldn't sense the foal moving around, and the mare had grown silent. Rolling over to see the foal, I was pleased to see she looked almost just like me. An odd little mark was on her right shoulder, but with a golden buckskin coat, stockings and even a flaxen and dark mane and tail, she was quite the pretty little filly. I bathed her, but still no moving.

Her breathing started slowly, but it was shallow. Finally she opened her eyes, but didn't want to get up. Hey, I can't blame her, I don't want to get up either. Already I could tell she would grow to be larger than me, and the only similarity of her to the pighead, was red tinted eyes. She raised her crania, looked at me, then Onyx, then back to the mare- she had the gift. Well, in all honosty, all foals are born with it. Where did you think imaginary friends came from? Most just grow out of it and can't remember, some stick with it. More than likely, it'll stick with her. She stared at the mare with some intensity, though I'm sure to Onyx it looked like she was mental and just staring into space.

"Coraline." I called, directing her attention back to me. I had decided on her name long ago, and she seemed to know it was meant for her.

"Who dat?" She asked, tossing her muzzle towards the mare. Well, I couldn't answer her. The mare never told me her name.

Horsegirl - November 18, 2007 01:42 AM (GMT)
The hessian looked on his new daughter with approval. She was like her mother, but looked as though she would grow darker with age. He could tell that her orbs were hued dark red, same as his. There was at least one similarity. He should keep her mother, seeing as her foals were pretty. Then his smile turned to a frown of concern as he saw her gazing into space. Probably just spacing out. But then she tossed her skull towards the place she had been staring at and asked in her newborn foal's voice: "Who dat?"

He stepped back, horrified. It was probably just an imaginary friend; he'd had one as a foal. But he'd named his. Coraline was asking the name of whoever "dat" was. "You gave me a child with mental problems?" he growled. Then he thought back to the way Melinda had always stared ahead at nothing. It struck him. "You're.....you're one of them?" he whispered. He backed up, terrified that he'd fathered a mythical/normal cross.

sassaboo - November 18, 2007 02:24 AM (GMT)
"I no have no mental problem!" Coraline flipped her ears back while looking up to her sire, insulted by his words. She huffed at him, before coughing several times. Looks like she will have a few minor breathing problems though. Calming her coughing fit, she started to sprawl her legs out to stand. Seeing Onyx backing up made her curious to try out her own unsteady hooves.

"Not so fond of us now, are you?" I asked bitterly, angry that he had the nerve to force a foal upon me but not to be calm at my ability. I was still quite tired, and didn't really want to get up yet. By the looks of it, Onyx wasn't going to bother me now. Looking to the side, I could see the mare smirking, oh she was enjoying the sight of Onyx in fear. "If by them, you are referring to one that has special abilities, then yes. I am one of them. It seems our daughter has picked up the ability as well. I can see spirits, sometimes they seek me out and sometimes I just come across them by chance. All spirits simply have unfinished business, and I help them with their last message or whatever it is I can help them with so they can cross over into the light. Coraline sees a mare that has been haunting you, I saw her at the Willow Grove. I believe she knows you, and I believe she died pregnant."

Coraline finally got her footing, looking up at Onyx- confused at how he was acting now. "What's wrong?"

Horsegirl - November 18, 2007 05:28 PM (GMT)
Onyx just shook his skull at her words. "If only I'd known..... Look, I'm sorry. I've still got a tiny bit of goodness left in me from being a Light as a colt. I'm horrified that I've made our daughter one of those who is a cross between mythical and normal. I don't know what'll happen to her, just that it probably won't be good. I'm sorry." Then her words about the ghost mare hit home. He inhaled in shock.

"Kiera? She's.....she's been following me? Can you tell her I still love her, even though she may hate me to the ends of the earth? If you do, I'll leave you alone. I'd leave you alone anyways, seeing as I don't want this ever to happen again, but still. Please?" Head lowered towards the ground as he tried to look pleading. One aud flicked to his daughter as she stood and spoke. He was so ashamed, he didn't want to speak to her.

sassaboo - November 18, 2007 07:01 PM (GMT)
"I don't have to tell her. She is beside you, and can hear you just fine. You've just never been able to hear her." I was interrupted by Coraline, who was stepping closer to Onyx.

"She not happy wid you. She say you try and hurt other mares like momma." Coraline frowned.

"You have no reason to be worried about Coraline, like you'd be worried anyways. She will live with me with the rest of the mythical herd. I suggest you change your ways, else you'll never have Kiera cross over. Come Coraline, let's go." I said calmly, finally having enough strength to stand up beside Coraline.




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