If there ever was a word for this
I'd say it through clenched teeth
Displeased with life, a condemming hate
To you, the future, I bequeath

Don't bemoan for me its that innocence
You're always over-rating
Can you stop with that, its forever
growing so verbing irritating

Don't be so sure that its that simple
For my vivacious little smile
Its just an act to hide my thoughts
In reality I am quite vile

I've learned over the years never to care
Not to think about the past
But its you I have to thank for this
For a life that will not last

You looked into soul, searched my crystal eyes
And you noticed they were blue
And yet you failed to see the pain
You really haven't got a clue

The anguish in my life is clear
All you have to do is take a look
My frustration escapes from every cranny
Out of every god damned nook

I try so hard to be greatful
To be nice, and understanding
Walked all over, time and again
You always use me as your landing

No one to blame but yourself for this
I was not born demented
Condemned, how bleary eyed you are
You actions will not be lamented

Life begins with death
And death but ends in sorrow
Too late for redemption now my friend
For I will be dead tommarow

If there ever was a word for this
I'd say it through clenched teeth
Displeased with life a condemming hate
To you, the future, I bequeath.


OKay thats it comments appreciated and also if you can think of a title that would be great :D

Makes me wonder to whom the poem is addressed. I have some ideas though.

Well written, good rhythmic sense, and excellent word-choice.

I would call it "On Your Hands".

A title....mmm, can't think of one, but the words you used like Andrachis said, very well chosen, and it sort of set a particular era or period you this poem was taking place.

HA!!!! you used lament XDDDD <3

i like zee big wordify-ing

dude, i think i know what its about, harshhh but ya i could see him feeling like that. *huggles*

call it "last regrets"?

it is a very deep poem i can really feel the emotion that has been set into every word.

haha thanks guys, and I appreciate you taking the time to think of a title, I really haven't got a clue on what to call it