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chromy - July 2, 2006 12:28 PM (GMT)
hope it is okay to start with this topic..

dunno when it was, think last year.. i started to write lyrics.. and now i wanna share it with other people..
and.. i'm a not a native speaker.. forgive me the mistakes..



FOUR

when everything is too fast
that it feels like a blast

i ask a question to my brain
i search in my heart
i search in my veins

when the rain is too hard
that he leaves me with scars

i ask a question to my brain
i search in my heart
i search in my veins

when everybody is filled with pride
that i just wanna hide

i ask a question to my brain
i search in my heart
i search in my veins

even when the answer has no name
even when the answer has no name

i知 lost in my thoughts
i知 drowning in my pain

will i ever be able
to play just a normal game?

i知 lost in my thoughts
i知 drowning in my pain

will i ever be able
to play just a normal game?



J.J. - July 2, 2006 12:59 PM (GMT)
Thanks for sharing... I always find that writing poetry/song lyrics is a very personal thing and can be a very difficult to share with others.

chromy - July 2, 2006 01:16 PM (GMT)
right.. it is personal.. but i stopped thinking it through.. let's say.. i don't care when others can see it..

but i want that others understand the feelings..

Rach112 - July 2, 2006 04:37 PM (GMT)
I liked this, it's pretty good. I have no talent whatsoever for poetry or song lyrics and I kinda like reading other people's work.

chromy - October 11, 2006 10:11 AM (GMT)
uhm yeah.. another one.. forgive me..
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FIVE

morning starts with sun
and i知 cleaning my gun

ready to go to the war
with the honour
it could never really store

walking through the streets
feeling the summer heat
feeling the cold inside
while reading a guide
to stare at this special site
about the knife
that is going to cut my life

losing power all the time
and my hero shows no sign
he could not suffer anymore
that i知 still a tragedy whore

looking at strangers
to find all the dangers

looking in the mirror
to see my stupid face only clearer

and the end of the day
is just to forget how to pray

and in the night
i just want to hide

under the blanket
i just cry

bitter tears
for nothing
even not to die




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