I had to make an assignment with classmates. They are kind of bad in English <_< I have to check EVERYTHING.

Could you please help me :( to check if everything is correct? :)

Monday:

4-9 years

Morning: art attack new year’s wishes.
The children from 4 – 9 years are going to the miniclub to make new years wishes. If they wnt they also can make cards. They make the wishes how the children want.
Afternoon: scouting expedition.
All children go to the woods for a very exiting expedition. They have to look for a lot of stuff.
Evening: magic show with firework.
The children have to come to the mini club for a spectacular show. There will be a magician and al lot of firework.

10 – 15 years

Morning: baking fritters
When it’s The day before new year there has to bee fritters. The children can make the fritters and decorate them.
Afternoon: sell fritters on a market
When the fritters are baked they have to be sold. The children can do that on the new years market on the plaza.
Evening: Teenage party with firework
Also the children from 10 till 15 have a lot of firework. But they don’t have a magician but they have a big party.

16+

Morning: football tournament.
Kids from 16 and older like it to sport. That is why we arranged a football tournament. We split the kids in teams and do al little competition.
Afternoon: zeskamp *
They have also a zeskamp* it is also a little tournament with a lot of games and air cushions.
Evening: New Years party!
The older kids have a new year’s party. It’s a party with also a lot of fire work. The firework is to see at 12 o’clock.

Wednesday: ‘’Easter’’

4-9

Morning: Easter breakfast:
This is a traditional breakfast what is especially organised for Easter.
The Easter breakfast at the camping is organised for the children from 4 till 9 and 10 till 15.
Afternoon: Searching Easter eggs:
With Easter people hide Easter eggs in the woods or in the garden.
The children have to find many of Easter eggs and can eat them!
Evening: Painting Easter eggs:
With Easter it’s traditional to painting eggs. You can paint the eggs in all the colours you want. After the painting you can eat them or you can take them home and use it as decoration.

10-15

Morning: Easter breakfast (with the 4–9 years kids)
This is a traditional breakfast what is organised especially for Easter.
The Easter breakfast at the camping is organised for the children from 4 till 9 and 10 till 15. The Oldest kids can help if they want that.
Afternoon: Bowling tournament:
At the afternoon there is a bowling tournament at the bowling hall at the campsite. There is organised a small competition.
Evening: Easter party:
At the evening there is a Easter party organised.
They can drink something and dance together!

16 +

Morning: Easter egg basketball:
In the morning there is a small basketball tournament. We organised the tournament at the sport fields.
Afternoon: Bowling tournament
In the afternoon is there a bowling tournament together with the 10-15 years old children. The bowling tournament is at the bowling hall at the campsite!
Evening: Easter party:
At the evening there is an Easter party. Everybody can drink something and dance!




Thursday: ‘’Fun Fair’’


4-9

Morning: Fun fair games:
At the morning we have organised a fun fair. We are going to do many games like: smash some balls, pull some ropes and many more!
Afternoon: Trampoline jumping:
At the afternoon were going to jumping on our trampolines. This is at the sports fields.
Evening: The puppet show
At the evening there is a puppet show. This is a show with small dolls and fun story’s. Let us entertain you with our puppet show!

10-15

Morning: Fun fair games:
At the morning we have organised a fun fair. We are going to do many games like: smash some balls, pull some ropes and many more!
Afternoon: prize giving:
If you have done your best at the morning on the fun fair, you deserve a prize! So do your best and win!
Evening: Fun fair disco:
Off course we have a fun fair disco at the evening. We finish the funny day, and drink something and dance!

16+

Morning: Fun fair games:
At the morning we have organised a fun fair. We are going to do many games like: smash some balls, pull some ropes and many more!
Afternoon: Prize giving:
If you have done your best at the morning on the fun fair, you deserve a prize! So do your best and win!
Evening: Fun fair disco:
Off course we have a fun fair disco at the evening. We finish the funny day, and drink something and dance!

Tuesday ‘Carnival’

4-9

Morning: make a carnival garland
With carnival are all the people dressed up. They party a lot,
and everything is decorated. And that’s why the children go make a carnival garland. We make the garland with different paper colours.
Afternoon: face painting the children
With carnival are all the people dressed up so their faces too.
They can choose all the colours of the rainbow.
And they can also be painting like an animal, princess, prince or whatever they like.
Evening: The carnival disco
Were going to make a party with the kids at the miniclub. Everybody can dance!
3 Euro entry and the lemonade is included.


10-15

Morning: making masks
We’re going to make mask for the carnival party in the evening.
afternoon Succer tournament in carnival clothes (with the 16 + people)
the succer tournament is mixed with the children from 16+ . everybody have to do carnival clothes on!!!
Evening: Carnival Party
everybody can dance, even the parents too! Everybody is welcome in the bar.



16+
Morning: Sport activity’s in Carnival clothes.
There are al lot of sport activitys at the sportfields. You can choice what you like!
Afternoon: soccer tournament in carnival clothes (with the 10-15 years)
the succer tournament is mixed with the children from 16+ . Everybody have to do carnival clothes on!!!
Evening: Carnival party
Everybody is welcome on the carinval party! Off course with carnival clothes or something like that.





Sorry it is so much! :(

Are you just looking for spelling corrections?

Monday:

4-9 years

Morning: art attack new year’s wishes.
The children from 4 – 9 years are going to the miniclub to make new years wishes. If they want they also can make cards. They make the wishes how the children want.
Afternoon: scouting expedition.
All children go to the woods for a very exciting expedition. They have to look for a lot of stuff.
Evening: magic show with fireworks.
The children have to come to the mini club for a spectacular show. There will be a magician and a lot of fireworks.

10 – 15 years

Morning: baking fritters
When it’s the day before new year there has to be fritters. The children can make the fritters and decorate them.
Afternoon: sell fritters on a market
When the fritters are baked they have to be sold. The children can do that on the new years market on the plaza.
Evening: Teenage party with fireworks
Also the children from 10 till 15 have a lot of fireworks. But they don’t have a magician but they have a big party.

16+

Morning: football tournament.
Kids from 16 and older like it to sport. That is why we arranged a football tournament. We split the kids in teams and do a little competition.
Afternoon: zeskamp *
They have also a zeskamp* it is also a little tournament with a lot of games and air cushions.
Evening: New Years party!
The older kids have a new year’s party. It’s a party with also a lot of fire worsk. The firework is to see at 12 o’clock.

Yes. some of the sentences make no sense because they are wrong grammatical!

Wednesday: ‘’Easter’’

4-9

Morning: Easter breakfast:
This is a traditional breakfast that is especially organised for Easter.
The Easter breakfast at the camping is organised for the children from 4 till 9 and 10 till 15.
Afternoon: Searching Easter eggs:
With Easter people hide Easter eggs in the woods or in the garden.
The children have to find many of Easter eggs and can eat them!
Evening: Painting Easter eggs:
With Easter it’s traditional to paint eggs. You can paint the eggs in all the colours you want. After the painting you can eat them or you can take them home and use it as decoration.

10-15

Morning: Easter breakfast (with the 4–9 years kids)
This is a traditional breakfast what is organised especially for Easter.
The Easter breakfast at the camping is organised for the children from 4 till 9 and 10 till 15. The Oldest kids can help if they want that.
Afternoon: Bowling tournament:
At the afternoon there is a bowling tournament at the bowling hall at the campsite. There is organised a small competition.
Evening: Easter party:
At the evening there is a Easter party organised.
They can drink something and dance together!

16 +

Morning: Easter egg basketball:
In the morning there is a small basketball tournament. We organised the tournament at the sport fields.
Afternoon: Bowling tournament
In the afternoon is there a bowling tournament together with the 10-15 year old children. The bowling tournament is at the bowling hall at the campsite!
Evening: Easter party:
At the evening there is an Easter party. Everybody can drink something and dance!




Thursday: ‘’Fun Fair’’


4-9

Morning: Fun fair games:
In the morning we have organised a fun fair. We are going to do many games like: smash some balls, pull some ropes and many more!
Afternoon: Trampoline jumping:
At the afternoon we're going to jumping on our trampolines. This is at the sports fields.
Evening: The puppet show
In the evening there is a puppet show. This is a show with small dolls and fun stories. Let us entertain you with our puppet show!

10-15

Morning: Fun fair games:
In the morning we have organised a fun fair. We are going to do many games like: smash some balls, pull some ropes and many more!
Afternoon: prize giving:
If you have done your best in the morning on the fun fair, you deserve a prize! So do your best and win!
Evening: Fun fair disco:
Of course we have a fun fair disco in the evening. We finish the funny day, and drink something and dance!

16+

Morning: Fun fair games:
At the morning we have organised a fun fair. We are going to do many games like: smash some balls, pull some ropes and many more!
Afternoon: Prize giving:
If you have done your best at the morning on the fun fair, you deserve a prize! So do your best and win!
Evening: Fun fair disco:
Of course we have a fun fair disco at the evening. We finish the funny day, and drink something and dance!

That's always hard to correct - it's probably not the way an English speaking person would phrase it but it makes sense (and not always technically wrong) - I mean the reader would understand what is being said.

Do you want suggestions on that too or just spelling?

uhm. whatever you like and have time for :)! I can do the grammatica myself too :)

How about I copy it and write it how I think I would write it and then you can go back and compare and change what you want.

Pam got all the spelling, and the grammer isn't so much wrong, as it's not how an someone who speaks English as their first language would phrase it, like Pam said. I think other than that it makes perfect sense.

Ok thanks everyone :).

Is "art attack" the name of the program? I put questions or comments in blue for you.


Monday:

4-9 years

Morning: art attack New Year’s wishes.
The children from 4 – 9 years are going to the mini club to make New Years wishes. If they want they can also make cards. They make the wishes how the children want. This last sentance doesn't really make sense....do you mean the children are wishing for what they want? Then I would say: "The children wish for what they want."
Afternoon: scouting expedition.
All children go to the woods for a very exciting expedition. They will look for a lot of stuff.
Evening: magic show with fireworks.
The children will to come to the mini club for a spectacular show. There will be a magician and a lot of fireworks.

10 – 15 years

Morning: baking fritters
The day before New Year's there has to be fritters. The children can make the fritters and decorate them.
Afternoon: sell fritters in a market
When the fritters are baked they have to be sold. The children can do that on the New Year's market on the plaza.
Evening: Teenage party with fireworks.
Also the children from 10 - 15 have a lot of fireworks. They don’t have a magician but they have a big party.

16+

Morning: football tournament.
Kids 16 and older like to sport. "like to play sports" maybe...I'm not really sure what is trying to be said. That is why we arranged a football tournament. We split the kids into teams and have a little competition.
Afternoon: zeskamp *
They have also a zeskamp* it is also a little tournament with a lot of games and air cushions.
Evening: New Years party!
The older kids have a new year’s party. It’s a party with a lot of fireworks. The fireworks are at 12 o’clock. Or you could say you can see the fireworks at 12 o'clock

Yeah that's handy :D thanks Pam you rock!

Wednesday: "Easter’’

4-9

Morning: Easter breakfast:
This is a traditional breakfast that is especially organised for Easter.
The Easter breakfast is at the camping ground I'm not sure what you call where the camping place is. You might use a different word but "camping" alone is incomplete is organised for the children 4 - 9 and 10 - 15.
Afternoon: Searching for Easter eggs:
At Easter people hide Easter eggs in the woods or in the garden.
The children try to find many Easter eggs and can eat them!
Evening: Painting Easter eggs:
At Easter it’s traditional to paint eggs. You can paint the eggs in all the colours you want. After the painting you can eat them or you can take them home and use them for decoration.

10-15

Morning: Easter breakfast (with the 4–9 year old kids)
This is a traditional breakfast that is organised especially for Easter.
The Easter breakfast is at the camping area and is organised for the children ages 4-9 and 10-15. The Oldest kids can help if they want to.
Afternoon: Bowling tournament:
In the afternoon there is a bowling tournament in the bowling hall at the campsite. There is organised a small competition. You could say: "There will be an organised competition" or "We have organised a small competition."
Evening: Easter party:
In the evening there will be an Easter party.
They can drink something and dance together!

16 +

Morning: Easter egg basketball:
In the morning there is a small basketball tournament. We organised the tournament at the sport fields.
Afternoon: Bowling tournament
In the afternoon is there a bowling tournament together with the 10-15 year old children. The bowling tournament is at the bowling hall at the campsite!
Evening: Easter party:
In the evening there is an Easter party. Everybody can drink something and dance!




Thursday: ‘Fun Fair’’


4-9

Morning: Fun fair games:
In the morning we have organised a fun fair. We are going to have many games like: smash some balls, pull some ropes and many more!
Afternoon: Trampoline jumping:
In the afternoon we're going to jump on our trampolines. This is at the sports fields.
Evening: The puppet show
In the evening there is a puppet show. This is a show with small dolls and fun stories. Let us entertain you with our puppet show!

10-15

Morning: Fun fair games:
In the morning we have organised a fun fair. We are going to have many games like: smash some balls, pull some ropes and many more!
Afternoon: prize giving:
If you have done your best in the morning at the fun fair, you deserve a prize! So do your best and win!
Evening: Fun fair disco:
Of course we have a fun fair disco in the evening. We finish the funny day with somthing to drink and dancing! Are you wanting to say "funny" day or "fun" day?

16+

Morning: Fun fair games:
In the morning we have organised a fun fair. We are going to have many games like: smash some balls, pull some ropes and many more!
Afternoon: Prize giving:
If you have done your best in the morning at the fun fair, you deserve a prize! So do your best and win!
Evening: Fun fair disco:
Of course we have a fun fair disco in the evening. We finish the funny day with something to drink and dancing!

Tuesday ‘Carnival’

4-9

Morning: make a carnival garland
A carnival is where people like to dress up. You could phrase that a lot of different ways. They party a lot, and everything is decorated.
And that’s why the children will make a carnival garland. We make the garland with different colour papers.
Afternoon: face painting for the children
At a carnival all the people are dressed up so their faces will be too.
They can choose all the colours of the rainbow.
And they can choose a painting like an animal, princess, prince or whatever they like.
Evening: The carnival disco
We're going to have a party with the kids at the mini club. Everybody can dance!
3 Euro entry and the lemonade is included.


10-15

Morning: making masks
We’re going to make masks for the carnival party in the evening.
afternoon Succer I'm not sure what "Succer" is. I would guess Soccer but don't you call that football? ** below it does say soccer so I guess that's what is meant tournament in carnival clothes (with the 16 + people)
the succer tournament is mixed with the children from 16+ . everybody has to have their carnival clothes on!!!
Evening: Carnival Party
everybody can dance, even the parents! Everybody is welcome in the bar.



16+
Morning: Sport activities in Carnival clothes.
There are a lot of sport activities at the sportfields. You can choose what you like!
Afternoon: soccer tournament in carnival clothes (with the 10-15 years)
the soccer tournament is mixed with the children from 16+ . Everybody has to have their carnival clothes on!!!
Evening: Carnival party
Everybody is welcome at the carinval party! Of course with carnival clothes or something like that. I'm not sure about this last sentance. Maybe "You need to wear your carnival clothes."

Ok thanks Pam :) Without your help it would have taken me so long :)! Now I know for sure that everything is correct!

Sunday, Christmas.

4-9

Morning: Fun dance.
Fun dance is a fun activity where children will learn to dance to funky music in the kids club. The parents can come along to watch and maybe join in themselves! It’s a great way to improve their condition without losing the fun factor!

Afternoon: Make preparations show.
Together with the entertainment team the children will learn cool dance moves for the Christmas show which will take place in the evening. It is going to be one big event that they will never forget.

Evening: Christmas show.
The children will dance and sing together in a fantastic Christmas theme show together with their family. The guests who want to see this amazing piece of art can buy a ticket for just 2 euros.

10-15

Morning: Making show decoration.
For a show you need to have decorations. In the morning we will make these decorations like a Christmas tree, fake snow and more. When we have finished making them we will put them in the theatre.

Afternoon: Make preparations show.
We are going to prepare ourselves for the show, just like the small children. If some people are brave enough they might even get a couple of lines!

Evening: Christmas show.
The children will dance and sing together in a fantastic Christmas theme style show together with their family. The guests who want to see this amazing piece of art can buy a ticket for just 2 euros.

16+

Morning: Make preparations show.
We are going to prepare ourselves for the show, just like the small children. People who are brave enough might even get some lines!

Afternoon: 6 camps.
A six camp is a tournament with teams that will try to complete a certain test: they are not competing against each other directly. During five minutes the teams get the opportunity to score as many points as possible for a certain test. At the end of the tournament the team with the most points is the winner and gets a nice surprise.

Evening: Christmas show.
The children will dance and sing together in a fantastic Christmas theme show together with their family. The guests who want to see this amazing piece of art can buy a ticket for just 2 euros.

This one was really good, I only changed a few things. By the way this all sounds really fun.....can I come? :D




Sunday, Christmas.

4-9

Morning: Fun dance.
Fun dance is a fun activity where children will learn to dance to funky music in the kids club. The parents can come along to watch and maybe join in themselves! It’s a great way to improve their condition without losing the fun factor!

Afternoon: Make preparations for the evening show.
Together with the entertainment team the children will learn cool dance moves for the Christmas show which will take place in the evening. It is going to be one big event that they will never forget.

Evening: Christmas show.
The children will dance and sing together in a fantastic Christmas themed show together with their family. The guests who want to see this amazing piece of art can buy a ticket for just 2 euros.

10-15

Morning: Making show decorations.
For a show you need to have decorations. In the morning we will make these decorations like a Christmas tree, fake snow and more. When we have finished making them we will put them in the theatre.

Afternoon: Make preparations for the evening show.
We are going to prepare ourselves for the show, just like the small children. If some people are brave enough they might even get a couple of lines!

Evening: Christmas show.
The children will dance and sing together in a fantastic Christmas themes style show together with their family. The guests who want to see this amazing piece of art can buy a ticket for just 2 euros.

16+

Morning: Make preparations for the evening show.
We are going to prepare ourselves for the show, just like the small children. People who are brave enough might even get some lines!

Afternoon: 6 camps.
A six camp is a tournament with teams that will try to complete a certain test: they are not competing against each other directly. Teams will have five minutes for the opportunity to score as many points as possible for a certain test. At the end of the tournament the team with the most points is the winner and gets a nice surprise.

Evening: Christmas show.
The children will dance and sing together in a fantastic Christmas themed show together with their family. The guests who want to see this amazing piece of art can buy a ticket for just 2 euros.

Thanks again Pam :P I feel kind of bad 'using' you for this :P


Do you by any chance know what it's called if you have made lampoons, and you are going to walk through the camping.

No problem, happy to help anytime. :D

Lampoon.......The only other word I know for that is like a caricature but I think more of pictures when I think of that word and I thought Lampoon meant more writing a funny story. ???

Walking through a camp site would be hiking.

Oh and we are not actually going to do it :P we just had to make things up!

Oh....well that's no fun! :huh: It sounded fun! :P (Did I just do your homework for you?) :lol:

lol yes you did, kind of :P!

But all in all, correcting everything and pasting and editing Pam's work took me about 1 hour :(

Okay, well - I figure if you learned why I changed what I did, that's the important part. And you worked on it too so I was just helping. :D

..lol :rolleyes: