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Title: What Am I To Do...?
Description: Random piece


CriminalMind - December 10, 2007 08:56 PM (GMT)
What I am to do,
Now you've taken your life away?
Should I cry, or scream, or feel something-anything?
Should I pity you, or pray for you?
Though I'm not sure if you deserve either.
So what am I to do,
When you took your life away.


Sometimes I wanna cry.
After all, you were something to me.
But then I remember what you did,
And all the pain you caused.
My family was in disarray,
And you were the cause.


So tell me what to do,
Should I mourn you, or rejoyce in your death today.
Should I be feeling something, or should I be staying away?
What does the devil deserve? That's what I say,
So please, tell me, because I have no clue.


So what am I to do,
Now you've taken your life away?

CalleighElleDakota - December 11, 2007 09:12 AM (GMT)
That's AWESOME! You're a great writer... :)

CriminalMind - December 11, 2007 10:23 AM (GMT)
Thanks. This was literally a spur of the moment thing. You know when you can just open up Word and write? I love those times!

CalleighElleDakota - December 11, 2007 11:37 AM (GMT)
Yeah I know these times...And in case I can't use the pc I jot everything down on paper...I love it when I can write for hours - as if a floodgate had been opened! :lol:

CriminalMind - December 11, 2007 11:46 AM (GMT)
Yeah, but then I get so frustrated when I can't write! :lol:

CalleighElleDakota - December 14, 2007 08:16 PM (GMT)
I know these times as well...It's depressing - when I don't know how to put my thoughts into written words...Until a week or so, ago I was unable to write anything and then I couldn't stop anymore...I wrote over 36 hours one chapter of a fanfic and other stuff... :)




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